Go Back to the Days of Being a Salted Fish

I casually browsed and saw another quick travel article. I clicked on it and sure enough, it was still the same routine, with a mystery of identity at the beginning, various sexual affections, and the same theme and the same routine. I couldn't refuse it at all Okay, let's stop fussing. I just finished watching the first world. I personally think it's okay. I found it quite enjoyable. At first glance, it seems very good, but it actually has a lot of shortcomings ① It was not explained clearly at the beginning. Until I wrote this post, I didn't understand what the small wish world was. At first I thought it was to help the original owner realize his wish, but then I found out that there was no original owner. Later I thought it was to help the original owner realize his wish, but it didn't make sense, so I'm confused now. ② It's a bit nonsensical. First of all, at the beginning, the bitch who took up the post without caring about SSS didn't explain the reason. It seemed that she just liked the heroine, and then she got disconnected in the subsequent plot? Anyway, it never appeared again, and there was no explanation. Secondly, the transitions were unclear, such as the one who fell into a pit and turned into a wolf. I was dumbfounded at the time. Until the end, I thought it was a bit far-fetched to say that it was a dream. I hope someone can explain it in detail. Finally, what is the heroine's purpose? To make a good sister ③Here's the main plot! After reading the entire article, I discovered that there is no main line! It seems that the main plot of the heroine is just to be a salty fish in the small world of wishes, making friends and flirting with the male protagonist. The paragraph was aimless and I didn't know what to do. I said it was appropriate to give a detailed summary, but I felt that it was only detailed and the omitted parts were omitted. Moreover, the plot develops too fast and there is no foreshadowing. As a reader, I feel a little bit pained in my head. ④There is no description of the environment. I think the author's writing style is okay, but there are very few descriptions of the environment. At least I don't remember any description of the environment (I went back and flipped through it and I really didn't see it). This leads to the reader's lack of sense of involvement. All scenes have to be made up by their own impressions of fairy tales. The sense is not very good, and it also causes the plot to develop too fast. There is no foreshadowing. The world ends at once. There is obviously a lot of information, but I have no idea what I am reading. In fact, I also want to say something at the end, because it feels like the ending is inexplicable, and I was confused (is it over now?) But I can't make any good suggestions, so I won't say anything The above are just my personal thoughts, which I think are the shortcomings of the beginning of this novel, and I do not force the author to adopt them. There are also advantages. In this impetuous era, there are still people who can basically keep updating twice a day. Although there are no recommendation tickets and no intention of losing enthusiasm, I am really touched. I will give you two tickets. There is a lot of room for improvement in this novel, and I believe it will get better and better in the future. I also quite like it. Do you plan to sign a contract with Duck? If so, I won't be able to hold on to the investment (the new people I invested in before were all given to me as eunuchs, which makes me mad) Finally, I just want to say: Come on, author! ! !