The Biography of Mangxian: a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality

Visiting at Minguo Street, Shantang Street, Suzhou

Come on, let me evaluate it. First of all, what about your golden finger? I haven't seen any effect of the golden finger until now. Maybe your pattern is relatively big, but what about the early stage? Furthermore, what's going on with that ranking? If someone within the sect is cheating, it's impossible, because a sect definitely needs talented people, definitely. There are cheaters, but it can't be that exaggerated. The top ten are all gone. Continue, the young man in front is not necessary at all. If he is a genius, then he will not bother to associate with people like the protagonist. If it is the eldest young master, it has been half a year. He has been in school and training. How can he behave like this? Compare yourself Treat strong people like this, continue. If they are young masters, then since they were born in a relatively wealthy family, they generally have a certain way of dealing with people. It continues to be a matter of the sect. Since you want to recruit people, you should also consider the character, trust, etc. It is impossible to determine the results based on performance such as fighting. Continuing with the description of who was killed by horse bandits, if you want to recruit people, then the place around here must be stable, otherwise everyone will be gone. Unless you say that it may be better for immortal cultivators and immortal cultivators to hide their attributes after birth, but you didn't say that. This is the result of my cursory glance. It may be wrong. After all, I didn't look carefully.

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Some book friends in the first few chapters said that the plot was not very reasonable. I reviewed it carefully and found that it was indeed a bit confusing just by looking at the first part. Looking back, if you still feel that the first part is not reasonable after reading more than 40 chapters, I may have to change it!

The setting of bloodline cultivation is really puzzling. I guess it will be difficult to continue reading after reading the introduction. The writing is good, but the plot setting is not very reasonable.