The Person in the Distant Painting

How to say it? I haven't read the romance at all. So I can't give a fair evaluation. I think the content of your story is too unrealistic. Maybe many people like your way of writing, but from my perspective, it's not very acceptable. The above only represents my personal opinion.

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It's non-toxic and looks good. I'm here to absorb the poisonous gas, not the high-quality blue skinny ah (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia (funny)

Come on, I'm optimistic about you, I've followed and collected it, and encourage each other.

Haha, come on, I don't think it's too bad. Some minor questions have been raised by others 😏

Already collected, will look at it carefully 😁

Come on, come on, come on! ! Say important things three times! (#^.^#)

This is my favorite style of writing ~ I hope the author will continue writing ~

Looks good, come on, little sister, keep an eye on you! I wish you will become a god after completing this book! Hey-hey

Come on (*'▽'*)♪It's great

We are all newbies encouraging each other and cheering each other on.

How can I put it this way? This work is written by a girl at first glance, and the playful writing style is very attractive. However, I found a problem, that is, sometimes there are some scenes that are a bit off-kilter. This guy's saliva is poisonous. I almost laughed out loud. I didn't mean to be sarcastic, I just felt that the plot should be described in a relaxed way.

The writing style is very good, but I have a small suggestion. The number of words in many paragraphs is a bit too much. I lose my mood when I read it. I may not skip it after reading it. It will definitely be better after improvement. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง😜

I'm not good at romance, especially ancient romance, so I'll tell you briefly. Don't mind if I don't speak well 1. The writing style is very good and the writing is very fluent. The writing style is biased towards classical Chinese, which makes me a little tired when I read it (laughs, but there should still be many people who like it 2. Story There are a lot of fantasy plots in it, and they unfold a little too fast, and the corresponding character traits are compressed. I feel that slowing down the pace of the fantasy part, and adding more character descriptions may be more selling points 3. Overall, it is still very good, come on!

I love this name. I'm very friendly when I see that the author is also a student. The setting of "dreamland" kills me. Let's work together.

Accept it, thank you, author, for making progress together!

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It can be regarded as an introduction to persuade me to quit. Basically there are no highlights to look forward to. Now that you've signed a contract, let's work hard for what it's worth.

The writing is very detailed, looking forward to updates

Small account, has been submitted and collected, welcome to visit again, please do your best

It's another day where I can't bear to leave before going to bed

The large letters are very artistic and make people feel comfortable reading them. I think the dialogue between the characters can be considered. An expression or an action can give a character a soul. Strengthening the expression and movements of the character can better portray the character. The plot is well controlled, come on~ work hard together~ encourage each other!

After reading it, the writing is quite good. But I still have to mention some things. At present, it feels like it is a fantasy fairy novel in an imaginary world. The romance part should appear later. The plot at the beginning is indeed okay, but this is an imaginary world, and the world view setting is not clearly expressed, so it is a bit blurry. I still hope that the setting of the world view can be described from time to time. After all, if the world view in the author's mind is not brought into the world, readers may not be able to understand what kind of story the author is writing. The writing is pretty good, but it would be better to occasionally include popular sentences. After all, online articles are just fast food, and not many people will read them too carefully. That's all I have for now. What will happen next depends on the young lady's future plot.