A Newbie Enters the World

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Thumbs up to the author for still persisting in writing martial arts novels!

During the epidemic, I concentrated on writing books at home and couldn't keep up with what I was reading 🤫

Let's like each other. I just saw it on the headlines. I also wrote about traditional martial arts. It's worse than yours. But I still want to finish it by myself and just use it as a practice.

I would like to make some comments. First of all, your name was not chosen well. Try to make the martial arts name more concise, domineering or passionate. Your name is too soft. Second, there is something wrong with your introduction. The introduction should be a condensed version of a complete story. Your introduction is too fancy and cannot feel you. What is it about? Because readers usually read the introduction first. If the introduction is not good, they will leave directly. Third, you are a traditional martial arts writer. The important characters in it should not have court backgrounds. It is best to write about the history of the court. Fourth, your first three chapters have too little foreshadowing and fighting. It's not intense enough and not attractive enough, but your writing is okay. Fifth, I heard that you only wrote 38 pieces in two months, which is too few. At least 2 chapters and 6,000 words a day are required. To be successful, 6,000 words a day is the basis and must not be interrupted. Sixth, biography There is no Luo in traditional martial arts. It is best to write about the current popular ones, such as fantasy, urban, and historical genres. More people read these, and it is easier to get out of the circle. Your writing style should be okay for writing these. Of course, I am just a suggestion. The above are just my random remarks. You can take a look.

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Nice! Strongly recommended🤭

The ancient road is west wind, happy and grudges, good books and good books 🤓

Recreating the situation in the world with delicate brushwork, it is worth savoring slowly.

Congratulations to the great man 😆😁, for spreading the martial arts culture. The great chivalrous man serves the country and the people, and martial arts will never walk alone.