What to Do If You Turn into a Mouse

For the second time, I would like to comment and suggest revising the introduction, it might be even more exciting! Then this book, the story is good and the content is quite attractive, but I personally feel that the foreshadowing is a bit lacking. The reading is very smooth. I recommend adding more chapters. Hahaha. Finally, I hope it can be more refined. In case it becomes a big fire, I can go out and show off hahaha.

The idea is very good, the book has been collected! Hope to continue working hard!

Well, as of now, it's a transformation-style work. Tell the story about the protagonist turning into a mouse. Have you come back? I'm very concerned about this, because it feels very... Uncomfortable if I can't change back. This book personifies the mouse, looking happy and relaxed. At the beginning, the protagonist suddenly turned into a mouse. After questioning it for a while, he took a leap of faith... Well, it was a bit confusing. Hmm... The development of the plot is a bit confusing. The protagonist suddenly has to go out and wander... Or as a mouse... To be honest, a normal person would dare to go out when he becomes a mouse? There are so many tricks in the city, cats, dogs, cars, rat poison and so on... This is not too poisonous at all, I think it can be watched. Why does the protagonist want to go out and make a living? Knowing that there are so many dangers, at least give the protagonist a reason. I hope the author can improve it. The logic is not very good, but the writing style is pretty good, and the jokes are not too deliberate. Overall, well, that's it. Okay, that's it, come on, author.

07 I haven't read many light novels, but this one is enough of a joke 🌹 Although the setting of a person turning into a mouse makes me a little confused, I still think that if it is toxic, it will be interesting. At least it attracted me. Since the word count of the book is relatively small, I will not write such a long review for the time being. The author's writing style is actually very good, not too funny, the language is also very relaxed, it is easy to read, and there is something that can make people fall into it. Becoming a mouse is actually pretty good... Come on, update and visit again another day!

The title of the book is very interesting, come on, come on

The imagination is very big, the psychological description and transition can be slower, but the plot is a little too fast to keep up with the rhythm.

The subject matter is very novel and interesting. When writing, I also used emojis and appropriate humor. It's so cute (ω< )★

A confusing sense of strangeness came over me. To be honest, I felt that there was some warmth in it, and there was a communication between animals, in... Forget it, let's not talk about those useless life emotions and chicken soup. In one word, quite!

Thank you brothers and sisters. For me, no matter how the platform changes, all I can do is to write this book completely. Thank you again for your support!

I am Xiaoqing😃

I found out that I can actually vote twice in these two days, come on

I haven't read this book, why did it get so much attention?

I started coding today and my health is much better 🌹. Please keep up the good work.

The setting is quite novel, please work hard~o('▽')o

Has school started in college? I don't see you coming out anymore.

Really pretty! I'll give Brother Gray a try first ❤️The first few chapters have a lot of laughs, and there are also various jokes that are very good, and it's easy and smooth to read. I'm hooked, so keep up the good work!

Very vivid and the subject matter is very novel

The content is good, but it also has baggage and is a little unreasonable... The main thing is that if you really become a mouse, you may not accept this reality for the first time.

This protagonist has no 43 at all