Mu Tian Chasing the Dragon

Brother, hurry up, it's very beautiful

I read three chapters and found that the writing style of the seniors is okay, and the protagonist is also very outstanding, and there are not many poisonous points. If there is something wrong, it should be where [Goldfinger] is...

Come on, I have recently read two new fairy tale books, one is Yours and the other is Big Fairies and Little Monsters. They are all very good, and the narrative angles are all very interesting. Believe me, I am one of the first readers to discover "The Rough Chess Fate" and "My Senior Brother is Too Steady"~😏 I wish you an early signing.

After reading it again, it looks like a little white text, but the writing style is still good. The plot does not need to be cliche at all, and you can add some ideas into it. This may be more attractive. I hope to see the author achieve the title of god in one book like the prologue. Become famous as soon as you write it. The 21st century in the book should be about cultivation. Wang Chongyang in the prologue is not important. The prologue can be short but not watery. It should be written concisely and clearly, and unnecessary things can be removed.

My first impression is that the writing is old-fashioned, the writing is not bad, and it has potential.

Already collected, keep updated, come on! Mutual income

Quanzhen East Ancestral Courtyard, Shenqing Temple!

I can see your seriousness and sincerity, come on!

Look at your pen name... I have a match The sea is easy to be cold, but the heart is hard to warm. Come on~ Not everyone likes you, you are not RMB 🤓

Come on come on! The writing is very good, please support me!

Another diaosi protagonist, he likes to meddle in other people's business, he will help when he sees a beautiful woman, and he abandons her

The fighting chapter is too long and is not suitable for current books, so it is not popular. It is better for newcomers to start writing books from the harem, and the scenes are changed by beautiful women.

The author is good, he completed the work and gave an extra 30 points of return on investment.

I would like to post a post to thank my reader "Twin Roses" for your continued recommendation votes. It is readers like you who give me a sense of relief and the urge to write a novel again. Maybe this impulse may not be able to be put into action, but in any case, I want to thank you for lighting up a glimmer of light for me. I hope that one day, this ethereal light can once again ignite my heart to pursue my dreams. Thanks again🙏

The author's writing is very touching. I have added it to my collection. Please pay attention to it (I have system energy points).

I invested 200 coins, but only got back 100 coins 😟😟😟

The author's writing and plot are really great! After reading a few chapters, I sighed to myself that it might take me a long time to practice my ability to write stories! Signing a contract really doesn't prove anything. A good story doesn't necessarily have to be recognized by the editor. If you are a great horse, you will definitely be appreciated by Bole! Come on! Looking forward to the new book!

Okay, but I can't imitate your writing style.

The author is great, I can't connect the first and second chapters!

Leave a paw~ Come on!

Added it first, will look at it later when I have time. 🙂