Zero War

I have probably read the first few chapters, and here are some of my thoughts, because I haven't read much. I apologize if I am biased~ First of all, let's talk about the classification. The military category is actually quite poor (although I don't know about other categories, but the military is really a cool area...). And for the first few chapters, I think the author is actually more suitable for science fiction, future fantasy, and other categories. At least, maybe, I think the audience of the military area is a little different from this book. Secondly, talking about writing style, the author has a certain accumulation of writing skills (I guess he has secretly written novels or articles even if he has not published any articles~). From the dialogue between the characters, it can be seen that the writing has been thoughtful, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. As for the plot, I can't tell because I haven't read it carefully. I guess the setting shouldn't be very complicated (because at the beginning, I entered the rebel army straight away, and then just gave a foreshadowing.) But the plot described in the text is a bit flat, such as the feeling at the beginning: the protagonist is a part-time worker - the protagonist has a friend who has a boss - the protagonist is kidnapped - oh, it turns out that the one who kidnapped him is his boss - his boss asked him to join them - the protagonist joins. Did you feel like you accepted it easily? ? ? That's probably what I felt at the beginning, just, roughly. I hope it can be helpful to the author, so I won't mention any suggestions... My previous suggestions hurt the author's feelings... It's too difficult... If the author thinks it makes sense, give it a try. No, we can continue to discuss it, so I'll stop here⌯'ㅅ'⌯

Has the author not promoted it? Even though they have signed up, there are still so few people reading the book.

Ladies, come and pay attention! I have tickets for you tomorrow 😜

The results of Good Guy are simply appalling First of all, the title of the book is not very attractive As a military genre, there is not much room for development for the author. Even if it is placed in Xiaoxiang Academy, you are also a talent And it seems that you have not done any publicity work at all? At this time, you should work hard to write more and promote more clicks and votes When you complete the outline of the story, the results may also be better Anyway, keep going The above is purely a personal opinion I wanted to squirt you to pieces

Come to Qidian next time. Your starting results at Qidian are definitely better than now.