Five Emperors in the World

I'm here again. I don't know what you plan to write, but I still came to read it.

Invested, collected, cheered (ง •̀_•́)ง. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤝

Dad, you are a god, 😊

The protagonist actually has the same name as me, what a coincidence, hahaha

Collected it, the writing is delicate, the story is smooth, and the readability is high. Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

1. One of your common problems, which was present in your first novel, is the problem of paragraphing. In your new book, there are still problems with some paragraphs, although it is better than the first one. 2. There are no semicolons in some places, which makes it uncomfortable to look at. 3. In terms of content, to be honest, I didn't see any highlights in the first three chapters. Although several passages used real-life jokes, they felt very stiff, because is the passage in the first chapter related to the protagonist's cultivation of immortality? 4. At the back, the little white cat and the big yellow dog followed the protagonist as soon as they arrived. It seemed that there was no causal relationship!

Keep working hard, I believe it will get better and better 🙂

Collect it and save more to watch together. Come on!

The author's writing style is exquisite and the plot develops smoothly. It's great.

There is guaranteed to be one chapter every day, usually updated at noon, and two chapters when I have time. I really don't have time because I don't have time to work during the day.

The beginning routine is quite interesting and makes people want to continue reading But the bad thing is that many sentences do not have periods It is quite uncomfortable to watch, remember to add periods Collected 😁😁😁