The Correct Way to Open a Star

I really enjoyed watching it. The main character's goal is not fame and fortune, but just money for the treatment of a little girl in an orphanage. It's very touching and admirable. Later, the protagonist met the heroine (probably). It instantly became like licking a dog. The most outrageous thing is that in the first few chapters, the protagonist was sad and cried when he thought of his wife in his previous life, and then it was amazing. Maybe this is love 🙂 It's really funny.

The Blessed Virgin suggested writing a Bible

The name of the main character is a bit confusing. Why not call him Long Aotian?

When primary school students enter society, who will die if you don't die?

I felt sick after watching it, making me look like this savior

Just by reading the title, I can give you the definition of poisonous article. Be careful, come here if you are not afraid of being poisoned.

Change the name of the protagonist. Thanks to the scholarly family you wrote, the name of the scholarly family would be so middle-class. Why not let the protagonist be called Long Aotian?

None of the comments praised it. I suggest you consider it as an inappropriate outline and revise it completely. No one will read it anyway.

Please be close to reality when writing

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The way to open the star is correct. Unfortunately, the way I opened it is wrong. Let's wait until twenty years later to open it again.

I was the only one who voted 🤭