Douluo: I Am Feng Xiaotian

Chapters 145 and 146 are really interesting. How dare the author criticize the master's feelings? First, a team of girls and a team of men from both sides fought to steal the soul ring, and the protagonist secretly picked it up. Then the men's team defeated the beauty team and found that the soul beast was gone, so they wanted to kill the beauty team to vent their anger. The hero saw this and came to the rescue. That's good, they are a beauty team after all. Then the male protagonist killed all the male team. There's nothing wrong with it, after all, the weak eat the strong. Next, the male protagonist continued to be his good guy and treated the injuries of the female team. The woman said that she wanted to thank the male protagonist profusely, but the male protagonist also refused. Well, it's not bad, after all, the male protagonist is rich and looks down on him. After rejecting the offer, the male protagonist added, "But it's okay to agree with me." I thought, seeing that the woman was serious about it, the male protagonist added, "Just kidding." What a joke. I think all the masters are qualified to scold you. At least they are just emotional idiots. You flirted with the girl like this, she blushed and you said it was a joke. You are not a scumbag, who can be considered a scumbag? If you have to fall in love with a beautiful woman? Even if you just met her, you have no basis for any relationship. Don't be like this, okay? There aren't enough female protagonists now? It would be too cruel not to marry him in the later stage. After all, you only finished criticizing the master in the first few chapters.

The ending and recovery are too poisonous, and since the fist blade cannot be attached with a soul ring, wouldn't it be better to remove the fist blade and write that the protagonist has obtained the inheritance of King Lanling?

Author, your design is too lax, and I can find so many flaws for you after just reading two pages. Innate level 6 soul power: 10-year-old soul master, 12-year-old level 15, 16-year-old great soul master, 25-year-old soul master, 40-year-old soul sect, 55-year-old soul king, and around 70 years old, there is hope of becoming a soul emperor. (Note: Geniuses recognized by the mainland. Only those who have achieved this qualification are worthy of possessing the century-old soul ring. Reference: Tang San's one-hundred-year-old soul ring was indeed regarded by Li Yusong as an ordinary person when he enrolled in school.) Innate level 8 soul power: 8-year-old soul master, 12-year-old level 21, 18-year-old soul master, 25-year-old soul sect, 35-year-old soul king, 50-year-old soul emperor, 65-year-old soul saint. There is some hope of breaking through Soul Douluo in the future. (Remarks: Shrek Academy's admission standards, the qualifications of the members of the top five soul master academy-level teams in the soul master competition.)

In fact, I have a bold idea. When Tang San was 6 years old and went to Notting City, you could squat on Xiao Wu (a moving hundred thousand year spirit ring). Tang San didn't know Xiao Wu at that time (to prevent accidents, don't let Tang San see Xiao Wu), and you could kill her (at this time, this can be It is best to kill a hundred thousand year soul beast (without the protection of the male protagonist and Xiao Ming), and have a hundred thousand year soul ring. If you can't bear it, you can let your Devouring Martial Soul absorb a little (to help you reduce the pressure), or directly give you the Devouring Martial Soul and let it devour and evolve. Author, what do you think of this?

As for becoming a disciple of Dugu Bo, I don't think it's bad. First of all, the protagonist's own backing is not very big. Becoming a disciple of Dugu Bo is equivalent to finding a backer. Having a protector will prevent him from being destroyed in the middle. It is better than those who worship the master. The master is called the master because of the ten theories of martial arts. Only one or two of the ten theories of martial arts appear in the original work. One of them is that plant-type martial spirits can absorb the soul rings of animal-type spirit beasts, but this theory is not applicable to everyone. Tang San is because This is because the Blue Silver Grass martial soul is not repelled by other soul beasts. As for the limit absorption years of soul rings and the knowledge of soul beasts, it cannot be studied without a large amount of manual data. Most of these sect forces are researching, and it is not the exclusive knowledge of the master. It can only be said that the master obtained it through certain channels. As for the strength of the master, everyone knows that the golden iron triangle combination in the original work is not enough for Dugu Bo to fight alone, not to mention that the current Dugu Bo is definitely stronger than in the original work. As for whether the protagonist should join the Wuhun Palace, I don't think it's possible now. I'm more inclined to accept Qian Renxue directly and support her to rise to the top. Anyone who has read the original work knows that Bibi Dong has gone crazy. She sincerely wanted to bring down the Wuhun Palace, so that she made enemies everywhere, and her good cards were ruined...

You can grab the Star Anise Ice Grass and Fiery Apricot Jiaoshu, and let the Wuhun evolve again to give the other two heads the attributes of fire and ice. In the later stage, you can also use the clone of King Lanling and the Wuhun real body to separate the heads into three wolves with different attributes. After developing them, you can also create your own synthetic soul skills, such as the combination of wind and fire, wind and ice, and the popular Ice and Fire Two Heavens, right? 🤓 How about it? I have a lot of ideas =￣ω￣=

I don't like Tang San, but I hope to snatch away all the opportunities Tang San has. Tang San is super disgusting. It's disgusting to read Douluo fanfics and admit that Tang San worshiped the master and joined Shrek. To a certain extent, Tang San was very selfish. 1 Tang San and Wuhun Palace Tang Hao because of his wife made the four major sects of the Haotian Sect withdraw from the world without thinking about the overall situation. Tang San Because Wuhun Palace chased Ah Biao and Wuhun Palace were at odds with each other, but in the end they were not Ah Yin whom Wu Soul Palace killed was still alive, but his cultivation had declined, and Being weak in this continent was the original sin. A Yin came out without the corresponding strength Is it Wuhun Palace's fault that Lang Tang Hao also exposed him? Is it wrong for a soul master to kill a soul beast ? How many soul beasts had Tang San and the others killed in their lifetime? Don't soul beasts have families? 2 After Tang San was caught by Dugu Bo, he healed Dugu Bo's wounds and asked Dugu Bo to agree to his three conditions. But in the end, he took all the herbs in Dugu Bo's medicinal garden and gave them to his own people. Didn't Dugu Bo's Sun Ru not need them? And Tang San got it all It took at least tens of thousands of years for a medicinal herb to grow If you have any conscience, you will save some, right? 3 Soul Beast Competition Tang San and Feng Xiaotian Wouldn't it be bad for Feng Xiaotian to win in the competition? They both entered the finals anyway, and Tang San would rather expose the Clear Sky Hammer than let him Feng Xiaotian loses, knowing that Haotian Douluo and Wuhun Temple are at odds. He would rather be exposed and let himself win than put his teammates in danger. In 4. When Xiao Wu was taken away by the Titan Giant Ape in the Star Dou Forest, he would rather put his teammates in danger than say what Shrek is. I think Xiao Wu is the only one Tang San considers to be his family. If Xiao Wu was not captured by the Titan ape or other powerful spirit beast, then Tang San would definitely say (We don't want to waste the chance that so-and-so gave us to fight for survival and go to the teachers first) 4 Xiao Wu was exposed during the award ceremony Tang San would rather let his teammates and teachers be surrounded by Wuhun Palace to protect Xiao Wu. Do you think Shusan is right but Wuhun Palace is wrong? Is it wrong for a soul master to kill a soul beast? Knowing that hundred thousand year soul beasts and soul bones are super attractive soul beasts, yet still let Xiao Wu stay by his side. In the end, Tang Guo paid Tang San and Xiao Wu at the cost of injury 5 Is Wuhun Palace the bad guy? They awaken poor soul masters for free. Are they bad people? Behind the great power, there must be a more evil darkness. When Tang San attacked the city , he asked Dugu Bo to poison the city. People in a city had no choice but to attack the city Which of the Dongwu soul poison spiders could not poison? But did Bibi Dong poison and kill ordinary people? How many ordinary people did Tang San let Dugu Bo poison to death in a city? Bibi Dong only eliminated those who hindered the development of Wuhun Palace. What about Tang San? Is Wuhun Palace a bad person? When Zhu San defeated Bibi Dong in the end, Bibi Dong begged him to let him go Qian Renxue, but he directly broke Qian Renxue's godhead and could never go any further This would be worse than death for the soul master. Alas, Bibi Dong was wrong, but he got the retribution he deserved in the end. But what about Qian Qixue? If it weren't for Zhuchao halo, Tang San would have persisted to the end? Qian Renxue defeated Tang San several times but failed to kill him The last move was to make a move, but Tang San just destroyed Qian Renxue's Qingzi once In the end, when he became a god, Tang San could take two people to the God Realm, but Ma Hong Jun, because of his low divine status, could not Taking himself as a friend to the God Realm, he asked stupid Sanzhi Do you know what Tang San said about principles? He said principles, hehe, Shrek and others Go through fire and water for Tang San, but Tang San finally said that principles didn't even help at all 5 After Tang San passed the Road to Kill Gods I lost an herb in the Blood Tan and the Blood Tan was destroyed What was it to prevent it from harming the world? People are basically dead and lifeless. Only a few strong people will get the Killing God Domain After going out, who will argue with the Pu Tao people? Everyone with the domain is not the strong Tang San Destroy it if you say it is, is it his? He just doesn't want others to obtain the Killing Field, because then he will be the last person to obtain the Killing Field. The above is my personal opinion.

Come on, I hope the heroine is Huo Wu or Shui Binger

Come on, come on. This is the first time I've seen someone write about Feng Xiaotian.

Tang San participated in the competition when he was fourteen to fifteen years old in the original work. Feng Xiaotian and Huowu and others were basically around nineteen or twenty. The author described Feng Xiaotian as being born with full soul power. He ate a lot of fairy grass and used the ice and fire eyes. Finally, there was more than a year until the competition started. In this way, Feng Xiaotian was around 16 or 17, with a soul power of 44, and all the fairy grass was given to the dog. Bing The Fire Eyes are all used by dogs. You have to say that you are born with full soul power and don't need to practice hard at anything. When the protagonist participates in the competition, he must be at the Soul King level of the golden generation of the Wuhun Temple. He uses fairy grass and the Two Eyes. He must be over 60 to participate in the competition. You have used several fairy grasses. You must be close to level 70. I don't understand.

The heroine, plot, adding supporting characters, etc. Can all be discussed!

Come and vote, open the likes of the harem and see how many people support the harem 😁😁

I'm so poisoned, if you don't accept those women, why are you flirting with them?

Support the heroine Qian Renxue🤫

Too lazy to type again, just lazy 😜 If someone thinks that Wuhun Temple is useless, you can type the following paragraph. If someone uses Bibi Dong to refute, they have completely failed to understand Douluo. Because Bibi Dong wanted to destroy the Wuhun Palace at that time, and it didn't matter how generous he was to others. So if you look at the Douluo enshrined in the palace, none of them paid any attention to him. He just laughed at the two Douluo generals, Ju Gui Douluo and Qian Renxue. They were not his. The reason why he is the pope is actually the compensation given to him by the great priest Qian Daoliu, and in exchange for her not killing Qian Renxue. Some people wanted to cleanse Tang San just by massacring the city, but he couldn't cleanse him from destroying the city of slaughter no matter what. And the fairy grass is actually not Tang San's shining point. Tang San asked Dugu Bo for three conditions and Dugu Bo agreed. His words also count as fulfilling the first request. The fairy grass was served in a pot without asking Dugu Bo. Because he knew that Dugu Bo would not fully agree to give him a little at most, so he went ahead and started it. I didn't mention leaving one for him and his granddaughter, nor for Shrek's fairy grass. Of course it's generous to show generosity to others, and I'm also generous to share the money I spent with you. When Ning Rongrong taught him distraction control, he felt at ease and felt that he had done her a great favor. Anyway, it doesn't matter if I learn the martial arts of other sects, I can just repay the favor, but if outsiders learn the martial arts of my Tang sect, they will be killed without mercy.

I give you this set of settings for free, but yours is a complete mess. Innate level 1 soul power: Level 4 at the age of 12, soul master at the age of 25, and great soul masters often cannot break through in their lifetime. Innate level 2 soul power: level 5 at 12 years old, soul master at around 20 years old, great soul master at around 40 years old, soul master at around 60 years old. Innate soul power level 3: Level 7 at the age of 12, becoming a soul master at the age of 15, becoming a great soul master around the age of 30, becoming a soul master around the age of 50, and becoming a soul sect around the age of 70. Innate level 4 soul power: Level 9 at 12 years old, soul master at 13 years old, great soul master at 20 years old, soul master at 35 years old, and soul sect at around 50 years old. Becoming a soul king depends on opportunity. Innate soul power level 5: A 12-year-old soul master with level 5 innate soul power can generally become a great soul master around the age of 18, a soul master around the age of 30, a soul sect around the age of 45, and a soul king after the age of 60. (Remarks: General geniuses in small cities, reference: Xiao Chenyu became a level 11 soul master at the age of 12 and dominated the Notting City Junior Soul Master Academy before the protagonist arrived.) Innate level 6 soul power: 10-year-old soul master, 12-year-old level 15, 16-year-old great soul master, 25-year-old soul master, 40-year-old soul sect, 55-year-old soul king, and around 70 years old, there is hope to become a soul emperor. (Note: Geniuses are recognized in the mainland. Only those who have achieved this qualification are worthy of possessing the first hundred-year soul ring. Reference: When Tang San enrolled in school, he only had a one-hundred-year soul ring, and Li Yusong considered him to be an ordinary person) Innate level 7 soul power: 9-year-old soul master, 12-year-old level 18, 13-year-old great soul master, 20-year-old soul master, 30-year-old soul sect, 40-year-old soul king, and around 55-year-old soul emperor. (Reference: Tang San was an over-age sidekick when registering for Shrek Academy. It was set that when registering for Shrek Academy, the soul ring was released first, and then the age was looked at.) Innate level 8 soul power: 8-year-old soul master, 12-year-old level 21, 18-year-old soul master, 25-year-old soul sect, 35-year-old soul king, 50-year-old soul emperor, 65-year-old soul saint. There is some hope of breaking through Soul Douluo in the future. (Remarks: Shrek Academy's admission standards, the qualifications of the members of the five powerful soul master academy levels in the Soul Master Competition.) Innate level 9 soul power: 7-year-old soul master, 12-year-old level 25 to 26, 15-year-old soul master who obtains the soul ring, level 31 or 32, 20-year-old soul sect, 27-year-old soul king, 35-year-old soul emperor, 45-year-old soul saint, 60-year-old soul douluo, and is expected to be titled Douluo around the age of 75. (Note: Reference is made to the original work. Meng Yiran reached level 30 at the age of 15, and Davis reached level 49 at the age of 24. However, members of the Davis royal family have sufficient resources and practice faster than the standard practice.) Innate Man Soul power: Generally speaking, a 6-year-old soul master, an 8-year-old great soul master, a 12-year-old soul master, a slower food system, a 16-year-old soul master, a 23-year-old soul king, a 30-year-old soul emperor, a 37-year-old soul saint, a 45-year-old soul douluo, and a 54-year-old titled douluo. (Note: The data refers to Tang San's training speed, Feng Xiao Tian Huo Wu Shui Bing'er's age and soul power level during the competition, Wuhundian team Hu Liena's 22-year-old and 52-level soul king, Bone Douluo's innate soul power and becoming a Titled Douluo at the age of 55 , Sword Douluo became a Titled Douluo at the age of 52, and Tang Hao became a Titled Douluo at the age of 44) Personally set the total population of the mainland to be 100 million, and the total number of soul masters to be 1 million. Among them, there are about 100 Titled Douluo, 800 Soul Douluo, and 3000 Soul Saint.

Why doesn't anyone write a male protagonist, such as raping the master in front of Bibi Dong and Liu Erlong or having Tang San and his son fly together in front of Xiao Wu? That shouldn't be so exciting.

Let's kill the Titan ape later. We must do what we say. If we write about meeting each other and letting go of grudges with a smile, it would be too poisonous. If the protagonist writes like this, it is just because he is worried about Tang San. That is really poisonous, so we must kill the Titan ape. Wouldn't the Titan ape make a good soul ring?

It was originally well written, but the protagonist has been poisoned since he arrived in Tiandou City.

After reading so many Douluo fanfics, it becomes more and more scary. The setting of Douluo World is like a test paper with a perfect score of 100 points. As a result, various fanfics write in a mess, and the score limit (setting) is used for various weird reasons. Also, I just take it openly and without any reason. In fact, I don't think this setting is a big deal. After all, it is a fan work. I can understand it, but can you write it in the introduction, or send a leaflet to explain it, or tell the past reasons at the beginning and end of the chapter (even if you say a mutation or I want to cheat the protagonist). After all, this is a fan, not an original work. Everyone has read Douluo and has accepted the setting. Please polish the character of the protagonist of the Douluo fanfic carefully. I won't talk about the subsequent series of Douluo (because I only watched the beginning of Douluo 1 and Douluo 2 and I personally found it unacceptable and stopped watching it). Most of the protagonists of Douluo 1 and the people in the protagonist group can be regarded as positive images. At least most of them do not violate the moral bottom line of most people. (If you have any suggestions, please I am an old keyboard warrior when you come to play with me. I will talk about my love for Wuhun Temple later.) Most people, including me, like justice, so it is difficult to write the protagonist's character. The positive character is mostly the same as the protagonist's character. I don't think many people write the negative character (evil) (I won't read it anyway). Most fan works are to compensate for regrets and make the story more and more interesting. The more beautiful it is, the center of the plot is written, but it is not easy to write a Douluo fanfic with this as the center, so Douluo fanfics give people a cookie-cutter feeling, so the authors changed their routine and wrote about high combat power, explosive writing, and full of special effects. Many fan fictions only wrote a dozen chapters and the combat power was inexplicably very high, and some wished that they could become better by just a few steps after awakening. In seconds, all the settings of the original book were completely devoured. Reading it made my scalp numb and my combat power was so low that I couldn't help but click on the upper left corner. (As an old bookworm who has been reading online novels since the beginning of the Internet literary world, I read these novels just like the Shuangwen novels I read before. There was no fluctuation in my heart and I even wanted to laugh inexplicably. I just wanted to say two words: this is it). Personally, I still prefer the Douluo novel, otherwise I wouldn't insist on reading the fanfic. I just want to say something else. Don't be obsessed with the setting. Don't hack the protagonist group at every turn. Don't break up CPs at every turn. Don't always think that it's a shame to hang out with the protagonist. Don't always think that immortals can be picked and eaten at will. Don't always make soul bones and soul ring skills very, very powerful. At least you can make up a reason to explain it. I also keep saying that the protagonist group has various problems, but the problem of the protagonist you wrote is more serious than the original protagonist group (serious double standard). These problems seriously affected my reading experience and made me unhappy. It really made me feel better to say it. Let me talk about those who like Wuhun Temple. To be honest, I really like Wuhun Temple, but please be sensible if you like it. Don't think that everything Wuhun Temple does is right just because you like it. (Although Wuhun Palace has helped many civilian soul masters on this continent, even if everything it did was for a purpose, it still did a good thing). Wuhun Palace has developed rapidly under Bibi Dong's control, but Bibi Dong is a woman with a mental problem (just like Wu Zetian. Although many people praise Wu Zetian now, Wu Zetian is definitely a ruthless character in history. (If you don't believe it, check the official history yourself). She herself said that she wanted to destroy Wuhun Palace. Fortunately, Qian Daoliu controlled the Enshrinement Palace to suppress her. Otherwise, all the titled Douluo would be in Bibi Dong's hands. The book Douluo Dalu ended early. As a villain force, Wuhun Palace is still such a force. It is very regrettable. Its final ending makes people feel uncomfortable, which also makes people want to help it. Kill to pay for life, debt to pay for money. This is the ending that Wuhundian should have under Bibi Dong. After all, this is the battle for hegemony (but what San Shao wrote in the end is indeed a bit outrageous, and I can't stand it myself. It is just cheating for the protagonist and weakening the opponent). There is no right or wrong in the battle for hegemony. Bibi Dong lost, and the ending of Wuhundian being buried with him cannot be said to be wrong. It can only be said that destiny is not in Wuhundian! ! ! So I want to write about joining the Wuhun Palace. I also like it very much, but can you not slander the protagonist, don't slander the protagonist, don't slander the protagonist (if it's important, say it three times). Everything the protagonist group does is definitely not wrong. It can only be said that their positions are different. As the saying goes, everyone has their own opinions. This is just my opinion, but I believe this is definitely the inner thoughts of most people who followed the Three Young Douluo Continent in my era.

When it comes to time travel Douluo, the awakened martial soul is average, the family background is average, the IQ is average, and there is nothing to do if there is nothing to worry about. . .

Actually, I have passed the nine Fengshen exams and this book is almost finished. I really didn't expect that I would become a eunuch at this time.

Why do so many people like to play Tang San? If you know that someone is very good in the future, your first reaction will be to make friends with him. It's like traveling back in time before Ali made his fortune. Who would have nothing to do with Ma's father? Wouldn't it be nice to get a ride?

Why is it that Zhu Zhuqing is always the one who is a piece of shit? Tang San is nothing, so he should be the first to kill Zhu Zhuqing, or sell him to Goulanli.

Looks like an nt. Tang San can really travel through Douluo Continent without hugging his legs

After reading the comments, they all said that I ate grass jelly. I was still at the same level during the competition. I can't bear the poisonous point of suppressing levels. If you want to write a fanfic, please read the original work. Don't say how perverted it is to write a time-travel fanfic. At least it should be better than the original. Those pig's feet that get a lot of resources and end up useless, that's a big poisonous point.

I don't understand why the protagonist takes the initiative to reveal to Qian Renxue that he knows she is disguised as a man and wants to join the Wuhun Palace. Isn't this just looking for trouble?

I feel like the main character is a fool.

In nine of the ten books on Douluo that I saw, the female protagonists were Qian Renxue or Bibi Dong. They were all against Xiao Wu, which was quite confusing. Where did they come from to lick Tang San's bow to the master? They were all based on the same template. I had never seen anything else before, and I was tired of aesthetics. Speaking of Xiao Wu, she was always against Xiao Wu for everything she did. I had only seen Douluo Yi, and I didn't think Xiao Wu was that good.

One thing that is very poisonous is the finale. Tang has not yet awakened, and Wuhun has reached the age of six.