It's so Good to Look Back at Dusk

1. What's interesting about the story is that it's unavoidable but a little bit bloody. It seems like anything bad has happened to the baby. I feel sorry for her for three seconds first. 2. The writing style is considered to be fluent! The characterization is acceptable, but there are a lot of typos, incoherence, and inappropriate wording. This needs to be accumulated slowly. Don't rush, just change it slowly! It's just that when someone raises a problem, don't delay, correct it immediately. This is better. 3. The content and plot are rich in ideas, but the appeal is not very good, lacking a little feeling and empathy. 4. Write with caution and take your time. It doesn't matter if you update slowly. The important thing is to treat every work seriously and responsibly, because we cannot let down our readers! The above, let's encourage each other

Dear immortals, I broke my promise. I stopped updating, woo woo~~~ Something is really holding me back, I'm sad~~ Don't abandon me first, I'll update right away, woo woo~~~ Fairies, please...

Life may be tiring, and every advancement and climb may be painful, but no one can stop the big hand of time from invisibly pushing us all forward. Fairies, come on, let's work together, I hope we can become popular overnight. Come on, go, go, go.

I may have encountered Mercury retrograde recently, which is quite miserable. I am not in a good mood and the updates are not stable. But I hope the immortals can be happy every day. Let's work together.

Immortals, I am telling you. I met a bag in the writer's assistant system. I cried so hard that I lost more than 800 words in vain. When I was updating, I was afraid that I would time out and didn't post it today, so I scheduled it at 11:55 after 11:30. Then after the scheduled release, I returned to the draft box and continued writing. When I wrote at 59, I was afraid that I hadn't posted it, so I clicked Publish again, and then it posted the words at around 11:30. Sad~~~ Immortals, don't try it easily, you will regret it... Wuwuwu~~~ I am going to recode, so go to bed early.

It's really a bad thing to put off the manuscript for many days. Let the past go. Time can dilute all unhappiness and let us live every present with passion. Fairies, come on, let's go, go, go, let's have a blast together.

The writing is generally okay, but the first chapter of the chapter on Baby Kui, Kui's mother suggested revising it. It's a bit embarrassing to read, maybe because I don't watch female videos as much. . .

Dear fairies, let me share some news with you. The bald girl Annie will be online soon. Today's professional diversion, my hands trembled and I filled out the first choice of product design, woo woo woo... It's pitiful that the top of my head is about to run naked. It's not easy for immortals to write, and it's even harder for newbies to write. Come on, let's go. Wish us all a blast together, hee hee. In me the tiger sinff the rose. Fairies, come on!

It's good. Thinking about me not signing 300,000 words, but you signed it so early, don't you feel very confident? Don't worry if I'm at the bottom of this article. You really have to look at each other and walk together before you can go on this road. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, if there are any female fans here, they will also think of you.

Please support us by bringing a ticket. Welcome to come back and visit us.

Congratulations on 100,000 words, come on (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

520 Happy (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Sending you flowers.

I'm filling in the pitfalls of the past, updating, updating

Dear immortals who have passed by and haven't missed it, happy 521, I have sent you little flowers, remember to collect them Let's cheer together, go fast