Douluo Dalu: Invincible Upgrade

What the hell is a demon angel? Might as well change it to a fallen angel.

It would be strange if this martial spirit is not manipulated by the Spirit Hall

He actually worshiped Ghost Douluo as his teacher! Villain

I picked up a dollar today, I'm so happy😄

I only write my own books, and I can't possibly satisfy everyone. If you like my books, please support them! If you don't like it, please leave. I am just one person without a team. It can be said that I am weak. But I hope some people won't target me intentionally. A soft persimmon can be squeezed a little, but if you have to squeeze it until it's watery, that's a bit too bullying.

What a waste! There is also Shenma who seeks defeat alone. Isn't he also a time traveler? Don't add random things, okay?

Who is the heroine😰

Magic reform, inexplicably a Japanese team is almost as good as the golden generation of Wuhun Palace, it's a bit poisonous

There is only one Angel Martial Spirit in the continent, does Flender dare to accept it? Absolutely not

It turns out to be a novel about Licking Tang San! Waste of my eyes and time

After reading the beginning, I can't stand it anymore. The angelic martial souls are from the same line as Qian from Wuhun Palace. You're going to get off to a bad start. Join Shrek, and you said that the master asked you not to be afraid of being exposed. A genius with innate soul power, no matter where you join, there will be people willing to train you, right?

Didn't you say you never want money?

Rubbish novel, the concept of Wuhundian, if it is not used by me, it will be killed by me.

Is it too poisonous? 9999 Wives 😅

I'm afraid the author has some misunderstanding about Invincible. I didn't want to read the first two chapters, and can the author's writing be divided into sections? It's a densely packed large piece, just like reading a test paper composition.

It's so uncomfortable to read, it feels like a resume. Author, your outline is very good. You can add some psychological descriptions, fights, emotional scenes and other nourishing plots in the chapters. The outline is really good, but it's too long and painful →_→

Brother, if you want this book to get better grades, you must first improve your punctuation. Your punctuation is too confusing😖😖😖

Too poisonous. After reading more than thirty chapters, I just can't stand it anymore. All the changes were messy.

The hostility towards Wuhun Palace is inexplicable, and doesn't a time traveler have no sense of his own values?

Your angel spirit is free of charge

I accept that the protagonist is an angel martial soul, but I don't understand the same as Rumeng.

Just following the plot, do you think we haven't watched the anime? As long as you

I always thought it was stupid for those who traveled through time to follow Shrek when they came to Douluo Continent, especially when they were treated like monkeys during the soul fight, and when they participated in the soul master competition, what are you doing when all their soul skills were exposed and they still couldn't get any rewards?

After reading two chapters, Wuhun is so awesome and yet he directly rejects Wuhun Palace. Tsk tsk, you probably haven't died yet. Also, this writing style is awkward no matter how you listen to it.

What the hell are you writing about, eunuch, eunuch?

The author's avatar is [Oliji] brother? ? ? ? ?

This... This punctuation is not used well. I feel flustered (T＿T)

It doesn't matter if you write very little, it's better not to write at all

The plot is pretty good, but the technique isn't very good. It feels like it's all about who said and said it, without any psychological description. It's all talking.

You see, Wuhun is like a brick. It has attacks and controls to shoot the enemy. It can stun, break shields, hit, or hit cattle from across the mountain! Isn't that the enemy's nightmare? With special skills, you can distinguish between ourselves and the enemy, and you can also use bricks to heal injuries. In terms of defense, the bricks become larger and become an invincible shield! This is great, this is called invincibility!