The Shopkeeper's Leisurely Life

I don't know how to evaluate it. I felt a little uncomfortable after reading dozens of chapters. The heroine doesn't know whether to evaluate the Virgin or how rich she suddenly became. She said that the Virgin is a person who traveled through the apocalypse after all, so she should look at the human side. If she said that the Virgin bought a car and a house for her two best friends, she also lent more than 10 million to a sales manager whom she met two or three times. The key is that she didn't transfer a penny to her parents and brothers. I really don't know how to evaluate it.

This heroine feels like she really should read more books, otherwise she wouldn't be shocked at one thing or surprised at the other. Her apocalyptic background is of no use to her character design. It just gives her a golden finger with spatial powers. The essence is still a citizen's mentality. I'm not saying this is bad, but the character's experience and status are completely inconsistent. And don't always add cute pet elements, but also change people. So far, their existence has no impact on the plot. If it is not written well, the heroine will become a mother early. In short, although it may be okay in the middle and late stages, this early stage is too discouraging.

My hand shook and I accidentally gave you the ticket.

After reading Chapter 134, I feel that the heroine is not from the apocalypse. She does not have the vigilance and ferocity of the apocalypse. She trembles when someone stares at her? After all, he must have the aura of killing people in the apocalypse. He is too kind to the orc child King Meow. As a result, when the heroine left, he was like an unweaned baby looking for his mother everywhere. It was very embarrassing.

I have read so many films and feel that the heroine's characterization is a bit poor and her consideration of things is not perfect. After knowing that she will travel through time, she should be able to deal with the problems after leaving. Then it is not the kind of feeling that she is discovered and wants to find an excuse to go through it, but it is very confusing and aggrieved. The plot feels quite good, the general world view is still very good, and the writing is still okay.

You can't write it for the first time! Although the early writing was a little messy and a bit too Madonna-like, the writing style is very good, the content is compact, and the plot has ups and downs. It is definitely a good article.

Damn, I hope it will be updated and I want to watch the plot below, come on ^0^~ I'm waiting for you every day

I feel like the plot fell apart a bit after I wrote it.

Things change and people change, but the things you love will always persist

The heroine has no shortage of longevity issues. She should learn technology to make money easily. She can also learn technology, hacking technology, etc. To make money easily.