Jinghong Three Phases

I knock, it looks good! Originally, I came here to test the poison, but I already had the mentality of being a divine farmer, but in the end... Author, please accompany me o(￣ヘ￣o) and read three chapters. The author's writing is very good. It is no exaggeration to say that this book is the best female pornographic article I have ever read so far. The writing is delicate and the descriptions are vivid. After only three chapters, I became a fan of Jinghong. . It's not that I don't have strong self-control! Buying Shanshen and Jinghong stocks is just the kind of pure father-daughter relationship. The story is very novel, I have never seen anything like this before. The author will also play some little jokes from time to time, which makes the writing style very relaxed. The article as a whole has strong coherence, with no previous paragraph failing to connect to the next paragraph, or one previous chapter failing to connect to the next chapter. Very nice, the author is also very cute o(￣ヘ￣o)

People who read fast books may not like this kind of writing. After many chapters, it is not clear who the protagonist is, and there are no plug-ins or anything like that. But I want to say that this is a fairy tale work with a fairy spirit. The words are filled with a slow mood. Do you know why a certain game "Legend of Sword and Sword" declined? It's because its later works became routine and fast food in order to cater to the so-called "public taste" and lost the fairy spirit. The origin is missing. From the chapter names to the character creation, this book reflects the beauty of this immortal hero, which is elusive, oh, it still feels like this word. Furthermore, the characteristics of each of the cute characters are clearly distinguished. Does it matter whether there is a protagonist or not? Important, but does not affect the reader's overall reading sense. The protagonist and the main plot are just to let readers get more involved, and the author has already achieved 100 points with his exquisite conception and detailed characterization. Then as the plot unfolds, will you be surprised if it exceeds 100 points? Story: It should be about a mountain god and his daughter. Raising a daughter in a world is very maternal and relaxing, right? This is the style of painting. A relaxing story. Structure: The first three chapters are just about the appearance of the protagonists. The rhythm of their appearance is very natural. The foreshadowing and laughter are made with delicate brushstrokes to make the story world come alive. Even if there are no exciting fights, this is different from the usual cool novels. Creativity: From the perspective of an old mountain god father, it depicts a beautiful and fairy-like picture, which is enough for ordinary readers. But I will be somewhat happy with some interesting plots. Daily writing cannot lack those witty jokes and small theaters. I did it in the first three chapters, and I hope it will continue in the future. Writing style: It was written by a cross-dressing man, with natural and delicate writing style and exquisite word choice. I can combine psychological touch to write some jokes that are not very funny, but are very comfortable and interesting to watch. It is suitable for most Buddhist readers who have delicate feelings and are not in a hurry. The reality is already in a hurry, let the words make us quiet. Rhythm: This slow pace is actually beneficial. It can be regarded as the style of this book and the style that everyday writing should have. Readers who have watched "Cultivation Chat Room", do you think it is fast-paced? Not fast, just right. But I still have to point out to the author that some words can be omitted from the connection between the short story sections, otherwise it will be tiring for you to write and it will be difficult for the readers to grasp the key points. Only the ups and downs and laughter can break out. Update: I voted for recommendation for two days, and then the author stopped updating it. It's obvious that the contract has been signed, why? I guess it's an outline of the layout, please give it a try. Perception: Relaxed and happy daily writing, I followed it slowly and slowly accepted this fairy tale with a peaceful artistic conception as if I were reading a short prose piece. General comments: A wonderful opening chapter and a very beautiful writing style. But it is not suitable for wireless readers, but suitable for most female readers. This kind of delicate brushwork requires the author's profound skills, and perhaps the author only has a transformed Jinghong. It seems that few readers have been able to react to some literary allusions that authors have picked up at random, and they are all led astray by the witty and cute writing methods. This is true, see the explanation of "Jinghong" for details. This article is about a marshmallow, taken from the real cloud above the nine heavens, and made into a cloud candy in the human world. It feels sweet, but I caught my first love in one bite. I looked up, oh, it turns out those are the loves waiting for me to pick, one flower, two flowers... Oh, I turned out to be dreaming. Yes, dreams are sweet.

I passed by a male channel by chance. How can I put it this way? I read about fifteen chapters, about half of it, and I really like the two characters of the heroine and the mountain god. The background is that the world is about to be destroyed, and the heroine appears on the mountain of the mountain god. The first 15 chapters are really beautiful, and you can see the artistic conception and feelings. But I watch more male videos, the mountain god is not wrong, and the female protagonist is not wrong either. It makes me uncomfortable to have to separate. The rhythm of the first 14 chapters and the separation in chapter 15 makes me really uncomfortable. I will continue to look at it, and it seems pretty good so far. There are many descriptions of the mountain god in the first half, and I feel that the mountain god is the male protagonist hahahaha. I personally hope that the mountain god and the female protagonist live together, and I hope the author can arrange a plot involving the mountain god later. Finally, if the world is destroyed, destroy it and let the heroine and the mountain god live happily (dog head)

After reading half a chapter, I was sure that this was a female channel. The words and sentences used in it were just like those of a female channel. There is no problem with the writing style. It can be said that it is more than enough, but I always feel that something is missing. If you think about it carefully, it's a character issue. The first three chapters are full of silly characters, whether they are mountain gods or Jinghong. Therefore, it reads more like a fairy tale, because it is too beautiful and a bit divorced from reality. Children like this kind of story, but adults find it a bit childish? ! (Personal opinion, may not be adopted) The suggestion is to give more contradictions. For example, the mountain god was laughed at by other mountain gods at the conference (not the kind of inner monologue). You need some negative elements to enhance the reality of the story. It's so beautiful and unreal. Also, doesn't the mountain god deserve a name? Always using the mountain god as a proxy will weaken the sense of substitution. Mountain God is a profession, just like a teacher, a doctor, or a delivery person. Since it is a general term, how to enhance the sense of substitution? Replace it with a specific person's name for a better reading experience. (This is highly recommended) No other issues, the story is very interesting and I will continue to read it. Come on!

The start speed is too slow, shaking the book bag feels a bit like a big boss

The writing style is excellent, there are some little humors interspersed in the text from time to time, which can make people smile, and your words can create a sufficient sense of picture. Only when I read it later did I realize that this was an article from a female channel. However, the key to writing a book is persistence. Interruption without reason will make readers leave you. I give you a little support and wish you can write satisfying words soon! Goodbye!

Let's summarize after reading the first three chapters. 1. I really like to make up characters! There are several places that can be mentioned in one go, but the big one turned out to be a lot watery! 2. But the writing style is quite good. When it is released, please notify me to place an initial order

First of all, I have to say that the author is very talented, his writing is very artistic, and he is not arrogant. The descriptions of each character are also very vivid, giving the small animals in the mountains a spiritual character. Very vivid. But I still want to say that the beginning is a bit delayed. Why do I say this? Because as soon as Jinghong appeared, I guessed that she was not a spirit. I really wanted to know what she was. However, the author has been describing the birthday party in detail in the next few chapters. It is very uncomfortable to watch and not know what the next direction will be. Then the time traveler came. The perspective setting of the time traveler was a bit novel, but the dialogue between him and the mountain god went round and round in several chapters. Although it is understandable that some things need to be explained clearly, they can be put later and shown through flashbacks. Strongly recommend that the main storyline be released as soon as possible and be clearer The above is purely my impatient opinion

Some book friends said that the writing in "The Street Diary" is better than the main text (๑ १д१)< I am no longer a human being｡ﾟ(ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)ﾟ｡

Suddenly, for a moment, I felt that the mountain god and the heroine Zhao Xiaoqi I wrote looked like haha, they were both a bit naive 🤭

Here I come! Wish to reach a higher level↑

He's actually a girl on a female channel, hahaha. Looking at his pen name, I thought he was a cute boy.

The contract has been sent, it's time to invest while it's hot |･ω･｀)

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Come on, there are still many people who like fantasy~

Here I come~ Well written in big letters! Fresh and not convoluted

🙂 Silently staring at this fellow Taoist, why hasn't he come back to practice immortality yet?

In fact, I can't tell the difference between fantasy and fairy tales. They are so similar. Don't be discouraged. Come on~ The most important thing is to finish writing a story. Write it according to what you want. Others give you suggestions on how to write and modify. They are all for the sake of the plot. It is inevitable to experience setbacks in the process of growing up 🌹, come on~

Quick update, such a humorous article must not be short

Ah, this... The book is good, but it feels like it was written by a male video...

🥺You... You... You...

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Brother, it's time to update 500 again. Update it quickly. I want to help you update it 🤭

??? What the heck?? I thought about revising the chapters, so I deleted the last four chapters. All of a sudden, my investment in the new book was gone! I am no longer a human being!

Brother, are you still there? If you see it, please reply to me 😁 I have something I want to ask you about.

I was a eunuch. I deleted too many chapters and it directly showed 25 days of updates. Then I lost my mind. I clicked on application completion and passed... Sorry everyone 😢