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After reading Chapter 51, my personal feeling is that the writing style is rather streamlined, although it seems that the author is working hard. The description of the protagonist's character says that his IQ and EQ are both very low, which I don't think looks like him. Instead, he looks like a coward. The only description of the villain that is realistic so far is a guy named Murong. Even this ordinary person can defeat the protagonist. Party description, let's not talk about SHIELD, let's talk about the martial arts association. Are you describing the villain? And the protagonist still endures it? Do you have the bearing of a strong man? After all, Ancient One has come to you for help. The description of the heroine, the early description is more green tea. When you go on a blind date, you will say that the other person is your boyfriend. If you do this, if the other person is an ordinary person, won't he be killed by your suitor? Then after marrying the protagonist, the protagonist becomes depressed. The description of the family is straightforward: the protagonist is exhausted at home. Others, such as accepting two Japanese apprentices; extorting the Jingan for Incarnation; exchanging abilities, just exchange for 100 chapters and it will be completed. Before 50 chapters, they are all magical skills, such as the immortal mode, the coming of the tree world, the divine power of Amaterasu, etc.; And the pure protagonist who never kills. 50 chapters is so much stuff... I think there is something wrong with the author's outline. The main tone has been set, and there are standards for how many chapters should be written for a plot. Otherwise, there are only so many things in 50 chapters. Generally, about 50 chapters are a small first step. How to lay out the 50 chapters is very important. Many fine novels have a framework. If you write according to the framework, you will not be bad no matter how you write.

Countless poison points, not learning the transformation technique exposes oneself, sick, should be killed or not, disgusting, Sage mode plus wooden shield is not as expensive as the three Magatama Sharingan, IQ is not online, Sage plus wood escape can't beat a Green Goblin, rubbish, poor writing, still need SHIELD to stop the Green Goblin's revenge, inexplicable debt to SHIELD, tool man, no plan to learn ninjutsu, I feel like the author writes whatever he wants, support the author Eunuch, I have never seen a book that can collect so many poison points

Author, have you really read Marvel comics? Most of the Mandarin's words are obviously "you" and "I". It's too poisonous. You have a fairy body and you tell me that you lack chakra? Don't you teach disciples to test chakra attributes first? Two different kaleidoscopes. Tell me what color your Susana is? Rainbow🌈?

The strongest point of Senju Hashirama is that he recovers chakra quickly, and Wood Release is hard and can absorb the opponent's chakra. However, the author can change it to absorb the opponent's physical strength or vitality, and the hardness of Wood Release must be increased. I hope there will never be an Iron Man who can make a big hole with a palm cannon, which is really inconsistent. Come on, author 👍👍👍

It looked a little uncomfortable, so I gave up.

... Xiaobaiwen, logic tsk tsk tsk

I feel like my IQ has been hit by 10,000 points.

I just read the first chapter. Is the main character mentally retarded?

This is the most trashy Marvel fanfic I have ever seen.

It's pretty good, but I feel like the main leg is pretty useless.

Also, if you pretend to kill or not, others have already killed you, but you still smile and say you won't kill him. That's disgusting.

The first three chapters are really okay, but the rest are just messed up! The author, Naruto, and Marvel both know a little bit about it. The level of strength is confusing. A person with the body of a sage, wood escape series ninjutsu, and Sharingan can't beat a Green Goblin. The following is even more ridiculous. Because SHIELD prevents the Green Goblin from taking revenge on the protagonist, he inexplicably becomes a SHIELD thug. I know the plot behind it without having to read it! What a stupid tool man. The timid one is the Holy Mother.

The two Japanese apprentices are not very good. After all, they are killers. How can they be so naive? How can they be successful when they say they are apprentices? Also, when the protagonist went there, was he not masked? How did you recognize it? How do they know where the main character is?

Wood Dun plus Sage Mode is worth a three-magatama Sharingan, I'm convinced!

It's a good setting, it has to be written like this

The Nine-Tails and a Tailed Beast Jade are like nuclear bombs. Senju Hashirama suppresses the Nine-Tails with one hand. Then Senju Hashirama can't defeat the Green Goblin without the Nine-Tails nb 6666666

To be honest, every time I see the protagonist passively interacting with S. H. I. E. L. D., I feel irritated. It's as if the protagonist is working for them, as if his life rhythm has been rudely disrupted by this group of people, and he's not happy!

The Marvel world is full of racial discrimination, ingratitude, and self-righteousness. Change the world quickly 😰

Come on, author, don't stop updating, invest in it

Ouyang Xia didn't know Lin Tian's identity at all, so he just made a phone call. He must be sick.

The main character, he didn't even learn one thing and wanted to learn other things. I saw the Hulk smashing Susanoo, which I think is quite normal. Tsunade can break Susanoo with a force of more than ten tons with her strange power fist. In the Hulk movie, the ultimate arm strength is 80 tons. If you can't break it, there will be ghosts. You can use many methods when fighting the Hulk. The slander technique can withstand the Hulk. People, use the Immortal Technique Myojin Gate to directly seal him. Myojin Gate can even seal the Ten Tails, but I can't seal the Hulk without the envelope. The book is still a bit poisonous. The protagonist is so ambitious and can't take a single step. He wants to run away before he learns to walk. He defeats a few ordinary people and Kingpin. He thinks he is very strong. The key is that you can learn his skills. What's the use of learning a water dragon bomb? It's the Flying Thunder God. Isn't he delicious? It can also be used with the wooden clone,

Such writing power can also be highly recommended, tsk tsk tsk

The first picture started to slap the rich second generation in the face.

No one is the boss from the beginning, it would be great if you can learn some experience, come on

The author is not very old. If you have the golden finger of the protagonist, you will probably not survive for one episode. They are too mentally retarded. . . . . Just check the phone number and search for missing persons to find the protagonist. Lots of flaws. I can't complain, and my writing skills are not good enough. I'd better read more before writing.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing precious treasures, I recommend a book with three vulgarities and many joys. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...