Baiyitianxing

I have read the first five chapters. The writing is good, the writing is smooth, the story setting is okay, the introduction is interesting, and the overall impression is good. I would also like to make some suggestions. Some of the descriptions are too cumbersome and could be streamlined. There are also some problems with the paragraphing... Received.

The story looks great, keep it up! !

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I saw it on the post, saved it, read it, it was very well written! Come on!

There is life floating in the palm of my hand, and the travel-stricken people have arrived and collected it, come on! 🙂

Nice! The plot is fascinating! Worth recommending! Let me read it carefully

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Received, please come on 😊

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