There Is a Beautiful Woman in This House

The rain keeps falling, and I almost forget the taste of sunshine...

[Vicious Tongue Book Review] I am not an ordinary venomous person, so please be prepared. 1. First impression The title of the book is not interesting, so skip it. Cover, alas, it's a cliche again. If it is convenient for the author, please read what I said about the cover in the post above. 2. Introduction This kind of introduction shows the identity and background of the male and female protagonists, which is an advantage. But this brings about complicated problems, and it is not advisable if the harm outweighs the benefits. There is a dialogue at the end of the introduction. You can use a small theater style introduction, or if you start the introduction with the identities of both parties, introductions like "The Rich Cannot Sing" and "The Minister Under the Skirt" are full of humor, which is also advisable. For Diannu authors, I don't recommend that the introduction be too long. The style of Diannv's introduction is short and humorous. 3. The first three chapters As the author himself said, it is indeed relatively slow. Since I know the problem of slow heat, I won't talk about the three golden chapters. I feel that Ning is not very good at controlling the overall rhythm. Ning has too many narrations. I know I would rather write down the character relationships and background information clearly, but piling them all at once will make the reader feel tired and confused. Ning writes about the grievances of the previous generation of the heroine's master, but too much is mentioned at once, and there are too many characters. I couldn't tell them apart at first glance. Ning can actually intersperse the conversation or reduce unnecessary nonsense. Anyway, don't pile them together. 4. Writing Style Ning's writing style is average. Although there are descriptions of characters' expressions and movements, the so-called good writing style requires a comprehensive description of all aspects. It would be better to add some environmental description to enhance the atmosphere. Ning's description made me feel that it was... Written, but I didn't feel it. I wrote a paragraph in a previous post: As the saying goes, "all scenery language is love language", I hope that the scenery will no longer be an isolated scenery, but let the scenery become the external expression of the protagonist's emotion. This is the blending of scenes. The biggest problem with Ning's description is that it doesn't involve emotions. I hope Ning will notice this problem [In general, there are not many flaws, so go for it. In addition, there are some problems with Ning's segmentation. I suggest Ning read "Nuan Jun" by Xian Ting Luo Hua. His segmentation skills are very strong. Please hold back your venomous tongue and hit me hard. ——Cheng Yici

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I feel your love🤭🤭Today, I feel a little happy again😊😊{"NickName":"The clouds are light and the wind is gentle","UserId":330061847}{"NickName": "7 and a half lemons","UserId":339645640}{"NickName":"Ku Lu","UserId":328654605}{"NickName":"Yunyan sighs at the breeze","UserId":358276579 }{"NickName":"Luo Qingfei","UserId":337208571}{"NickName":"Golden Rui Liuxia","UserId":353948111}{"NickName":"Red thread blowing around the heart","User Id":337808411}{"NickName":"Book Friends 20201027101127040","UserId":356412720}Good night, sweet dreams🌙🌙🌙

Stay up late little beauty😁

I hope that my little friend can make you unforgettable and caring💖

Come on, this is what I think the male and female protagonists look like (but they should look better 🤭 Especially the male protagonist, the one with half-bundled hair is more suitable) 🤭🤭🤭

I can't help but think of some non-serious stories, so I just created a "theater post" to satisfy myself. In the future, all small theaters will appear here 🤭🤭

Yes, he is here, he is here, he finally showed up in Chapter 71 while holding his breath, and he pounced on Leng Lilou to show off for my male lead. (Hehehe, I had a great time playing it myself, and I don't know if anyone is still watching🤣🤣)

Starting from a female channel, I always feel cool. 😁😁

Come on A Leng. 😁

Let the hero come out quickly! I want to see Mu Meiren clearly

Is it a sweet article? I think it's so sweet when I read the introduction

Well, you have to calm down and stop being impetuous and daydreaming😊😊

I was not quick, I found out that the contract was successfully signed and I got a sofa

I like March, and I also like you, because you are all spring ٩꒰๑• ̫•๑꒱۶♡ ——Zhiah Leng

I have always missed such a magical novel. I like the author's writing style, the feeling of gentle narration. The writing is also very good, especially the small details, which you all handled brilliantly. It's very refreshing among similar works, really! The plot is not draggy either. Please tell me how you perfectly combine the writing style with the plot. This is an ancient romance, but I actually saw a sense of a fairy tale in it. Maybe I have only read the first four chapters now, and I feel that the name and content are not connected yet. Also, the name of the heroine is really well chosen, so refreshing. Anyway, I loved it, locked it, and collected it. Later readers, lock the author! Don't let her get away!

Come on, let's go together, Yun Ruo🌹🌹🌹

The follow-up update is coming😁

You are the moon hidden in the clouds and the treasure I have spent my whole life looking for. ——Ah Leng

The writing is smooth, the content is beautiful, and the foreshadowing is just right. It may feel a bit dull when you first read it, but it is a book that gets better and better, and it becomes more and more charming as you read.

... To be honest... I really don't know how to let the male protagonist appear. Originally, his identity and background issues did not allow him to appear too early. However, a few friends suggested releasing him early, otherwise everyone who reads the article will easily get the wrong CP and feel that the main plot is missing. I think my writing is not good and my logic is not very clear, but I am already trying my best to hone it. I have changed the appearance of the male protagonist again and again, but it seems that the more I think about it in advance, the more confusing it becomes, and the more I want to make him different, the more ordinary it becomes, and it even affects other auxiliary lines, disrupting the rhythm... So, my mind is really a little messed up these days. Yesterday, Ah Lu also reminded me not to disappoint investors, so I reluctantly uploaded a chapter. I don't know what it means 😭😭. In short, the male protagonist's appearance will probably fall into the old-fashioned "hero saves the beauty"... Although it is old-fashioned, but After all, it is an opportunity to reveal his traces, and it can be regarded as fulfilling the promise of letting him appear as soon as possible (it should be too early for the male protagonist to appear after chapter 50 🤤) ... If there are still friends watching, I want to say today, please give me some time, let me take a good look... Take a look...

Touch Xiao Lengleng's head😳😳😳

Ending … Mou Leng threw away the computer in his hand, laughed and clapped his hands: "Okay, the heroine is offline, the whole drama is over!" Mou Qing showed half of his head from the pit, and said: "Don't bother me, I... I haven't officially appeared yet, I don't want to be the first male protagonist in history to be offline without even showing his face. Corner!" Mou Leng thought for a long time and reluctantly agreed: "Well... You can protect your daughter-in-law by yourself. If you protect her well, we will continue. If you can't protect her... Hehe, don't blame me for being cruel. " Qing Mu and Ling Zhi whispered: "Otherwise, shall we run away from home? " A cold smile came up to him: "Believe it or not, I will open a harem for your wife?" Mou Leng touched his chin and raised his eyebrows: "Who is Chen Xiang? You sound familiar!" Mou Xuan and Chen Xiang, who were squatting in the corner, hugged each other and cried: "I'm sorry to bother you, it's our couple who should run away from home."

The writing is very good, and the descriptions of details and objects are also very delicate. It is indeed very slow and eloquent. Whispering, the main plot is a bit unclear 🤭. I read a few chapters and felt that I couldn't integrate into the text. I need to add some of my own emotions when describing it, so that readers can resonate more! 😊 Another small problem is that I forgot to separate a relatively long sentence with punctuation. Come on! The writing is still very good!

Today is another cold day for love! ! ! 😍