The Martial Arts of the Han Dynasty

The writing is very ancient. In an era when hundreds of schools of thought are contending, I rarely see anyone writing about this period of history. However, there are some problems with paragraphing and sentence division. I should have coded the words first and then copied and pasted them. The format must be well formatted before posting! There are no other issues, the writing is quite fluent, I look forward to the update~

The writing style is really good, and the detailed descriptions give people a sense of immersion. The book has been collected and will be read slowly (ฅ∀<`๑)

The author's writing skills are good, and the description of scenes and characters is also very good. However, the continuity of sentences and the rhythm of the story are slightly poor, which means that the reading is not smooth enough, but it is still very good. I hope to improve myself and write a good book.

The description is quite immersive and the fighting scenes are great. Come on.

When I read your book, I saw the feeling of an ancient chapter novel. Come on!

The scene description is very detailed and I like the style very much. Come on together!

I feel like everything is well written. Whether it's facial expressions or movements, I can see that the author must be very delicate.

Awesome! A touch of color in the book-famine era! Big cheers for the author! Already voted for recommendation.

Big cheers for the author! Support you

"Records of the Heroes of the Masters" was officially renamed "The Art of the Han Dynasty"! The cover hasn't been changed yet, mainly to prevent you from finding the book. Dear book fans, be sure not to collect customs fees! Orz Come on! I hope everyone can continue to support me!

Not bad. The author is based on a strong historical foundation. The images are vivid and thought-provoking.

Great book! Collected👍👍👍

I clicked on it thinking it was a historical article, and I was going to pick it up with a professional eye (hahaha), but I found out it was martial arts. After reading seven chapters, I would like to express my intuitive feelings. It is particularly subjective. The martial arts scenes are too detailed and long. For a pseudo-fan of martial arts novels like me, it will be tiring. The visuals are strong but highlighting the action will inevitably weaken the plot. My personal opinion is extremely subjective.

Here are some personal suggestions. First of all, there is the issue of paragraphing. I suggest that the author do not skimp on paragraphing. The words bunched together really affect the reading sense. Then your fighting scenes are still very realistic, but the plot develops very slowly in this way. It is said that in the golden chapter, you have been fighting all the time in the third chapter. In terms of plot, I have not seen the protagonist until now. Where is the protagonist... I really recommend that the pace should be faster. Of course, if you, the author, want to show your personal style, I won't object. The plot of this book so far is to escort a baby... And then beat it. To be honest, the villain... Is a bit dissuaded. Well, the above are all personal suggestions, come on!

We are both seniors in high school and writing essays, and they are historical-oriented essays. I need to practice hard on my first book, but don't delay my studies too much. The author's writing is good and has been collected. 😁

Apart from the Wei and Jin Dynasties, the Han Dynasty is the era that I am most fascinated by. I really like the story of this era, please come on! Added to bookshelf, will continue to pay attention!

After reading the first few parts, I would like to say that the author's fighting scenes are magnificent and lifelike, as if they are in front of you, and are the most eye-catching part of this book. I have a suggestion. I feel that the background and inner thoughts of the characters are not explained enough. The fighting scenes could also be increased in length. This book gets more exciting as it goes on, and I think it's worth reading.

DaDa, the small problems in the article have been marked, and some sentences are particularly well written. However, DaDa should not overly listen to other people's opinions on the general direction of writing. Sometimes it is good to have your own characteristics. Hmm... Also, don't waste your studies. You can write better when you go to college. Just like me, I am now a freshman, hehe

This is a collection building. In order to better create this book, I hope all readers can give you valuable suggestions. Format: - Character name: Schools: Confucianism, Taoism, Law, Mohism, Yin Yang, Zongheng, Famous Masters, etc. Moves: Weapons: You can also add a little introduction yourself. Thanks! I will read every suggestion carefully. Example Character name: Liu Qingyun Sect: Taoist Move: [Baili Step]. . . . . . Weapon: Short knife (name can be added) Character experience: How, how You can also add points at will.

I don't know much about martial arts, so I'll just say a few words I've read 5 chapters, and overall I feel pretty good. The descriptions of scenes and fight scenes are spot-on, and I can see that the author has a good foundation. The plot unfolds smoothly, and the characteristics of the characters are quite prominent As for the problem, I don't know much about martial arts, so I won't mention it Come on!

The writing is excellent and makes you want to read it!

Already collected, reading a book, will post later

Well written, it looks like the signing is imminent

It can be seen that the author wanted to write about traditional martial arts, and he did a good job, but traditional martial arts is indeed a niche nowadays, and it is quite rare.

It's still being updated at this time 😭 I've been banned

The writing is very good. Although I don't often read this type of book, the content is still very attractive. I would like to make a small suggestion, the dialogue between the characters can be improved a bit. Come on＾0＾~

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I feel that for a new book, the writing is pretty good, but some of the words used are a bit stiff and not so natural. In addition, I feel that the main line of your book is not very deep and prominent, and the power system is a bit confusing to me.

Already submitted, serial number 45, the post has been deleted.

It's so exciting, why didn't you sign a contract?