Bodhi Spring Full

From the wedge to the third chapter, you can see that the author has a relatively strong literary foundation and his writing style is good. Although the plot progressed slowly in the first three chapters, the characters were successfully created. When I read the sixth chapter, I had a basic grasp of the protagonist's character. The character setting was good and it was more to my liking. The description of the environment is appropriate, and there is a sense of background substitution. The only thing that can easily cause discomfort is the environment at the beginning, where a lot of names appear. Most of the young masters who spoke at the banquet had names, which are not easy to remember. If they are unimportant characters, it is recommended that the names be mentioned in one stroke. In addition, the long paragraphs may put some readers off. This article is good, I will continue to follow up. The author should not underestimate himself! Come on!

The literary talent is okay, relatively delicate, but I feel that when people speak, who is speaking is a bit stiff. Come on, I have collected it.

The writing is great. Come on, let's encourage each other.

See Chapter Seven. As the author said, it is a slow-burning novel, and the plot advances relatively slowly. But he has a better grasp of the character image and the characters can be established. The descriptions are detailed, the writing is smooth, and the environments are beautifully rendered. But I personally think that some parts are illogical, such as when Sima Fu rescued Yue Jue in Chapter 6. The reason he gave was too far-fetched. He was shielding Yue Jue inexplicably. Wouldn't the emperor be suspicious? Although his military power has been reduced, even the heroine, who is a princess, understands that Yue Jue, Sima Fuji and Xie Rong have a close relationship. How could the emperor who witnessed Sima Fuji protect Yue Jue like this not see it? Of course, since I only read Chapter 7, maybe the emperor will make some moves later but I didn't see it. Also, in Chapter 7, the heroine is Xue Qi, the master of the Purple Spirit Palace who is known to everyone in the court and the world. To be honest, I felt that the author's writing skills were good and the plot gradually became more interesting. But after seeing this, I even wondered if the author had been swapped... This sudden Mary Sue name came to me. If you must write, Zi Ling Palace, Xue Qi... I suggest changing the name. Back to logic, if there is such an organization that can make the court change its color, will the court really stand by and allow this organization to grow stronger step by step? I personally thought that there must be a minimum investigation, how could I not find out that the heroine, who is a princess, organized such an organization. Let's talk about the heroine's status as a princess. Is this princess powerful enough to create such an organization without being discovered? I hope you can think deeply about it logically. Come on.

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I think the writing style is very good and the language of the article is very poetic, not exaggerated or verbose. It doesn't look like a book written by a newbie at all. I would like to make a small suggestion. I feel that the image of the male protagonist at the beginning is not well outlined and is a bit blurry. You can add a little more description. Wish the book a hit! ! !

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I really love the writing style. The first article I collected is Nais (੭ु ›◡ु‹ )੭ु ˄̻ ̊ ˄̻ ̊ ˄̻ ̊ ˄̻ ̊

Great work, the author writes well! Awesome! Collected, please update! Welcome to visit us again!

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Thank you all for your great collections and recommendation votes. These are the greatest encouragement to me. I will continue to work hard~

The writing is beautiful, the description is delicate, and it looks good. I have accepted it and gave it a small support vote.

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The use of words is really impeccable, and the setting of the plot is indeed very good. Especially the description of some subtle details, which makes people moved by seeing the big from the small. And the name is so nice tooCome on ✌️✌️✌️🌹🌹

Love it, must add it to favorites, look forward to daily updates