LOL Chinese Server Is the First to Come to Me

In S5, there was a 0.2 Second delay when placing the captain's barrels, because there was a hand-raising movement So theoretically it is impossible to achieve the speed of light four barrels in Chapter 33😅😅😅 But since it is a novel, I enjoyed reading it! Support, well written👍👍👍

The game scenes are so exciting that it may be because I am more emotional, but the author really wrote the scenes in my dreams. In the 13 years since elementary school, there have been very few novels that have moved me. After Ascension, Fighting, this one is the same 🙂, so good luck to the author.

The writing is quite good, but it feels a bit overly enthusiastic. I understand what the author wants to express, but it is a bit weird after writing it. These are small things, and some friends may feel that it is great. The main thing was that transitional period. It was really, my hair was numb and I was extremely discouraged to give up. I still haven't recovered from it.

Um? ! ? I saw the main character left for a year and I was torn apart... Do I have to look for novels again? Pain

I'm really torn about your middle transition. If S6 is not easy to write, you might as well just skip it using Spring and Autumn Writing Method. Such a transition is too scary.

How can I put it this way? It's a pity not to use Kai Ge Xiao Yuren when beating Li Guapi.

Is there any heroine who is an aftershock?

The concept is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot has ups and downs and is gripping.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง author, I will recommend it to more people

I got the number one fan for one dollar, so happy 😃

Is Korean aid considered a national service 🤔

Everyone has seen how many times it has been. 😅 Let's change the word a little bit. Overall a good read. But adjectives are a bit lacking. Come on, author

As a veteran player of S2, what matters is the feelings. The writing style needs to be improved (a small suggestion: can the audience's comments be marked with a "" symbol? It's a bit awkward →_→), but I can feel the full emotion between the lines! I hope this book will get better and better... Come on! ! !

Unexpectedly, Brother Kai's little fish man didn't hit Brother Li, and he was blinded by the hammer.

Author, take a good look at the latest chapter 8. EDG respects the version. Among the banned heroes are male guns, and NB seems to have also banned male guns. This... Can two male guns be banned?

What do you think about the current author contract?

Author, there is a bug in the latest chapter 6. The last paragraph on the eighth page I saw here is about NB team, not IM team. You are writing about NB team now, but IM appears in that paragraph. You can check whether it is too late to code, and your brain is confused.

I asked why there is no female protagonist in the role... I suggest changing the name, otherwise it will look awkward.

Oh My God. Author, have you eaten the punctuation?

Come on, author😁

The world has changed from one time to another, and I feel a little dizzy ๑_๑!

When I watched the video of Xiaozhi and Junke, what impressed me deeply was the six-spirited wind Riven. Suddenly one day Junke and Xiaozhi stopped making videos. I suddenly found Junke in Huya years ago 😆😢

Uzi retired. Hope he's fine

It's well written, but the heroine is a bit unbearable. Well, I'm looking forward to the next one.

Dear author, I just read your book today. To be honest, your writing at the beginning is really good. Let's not talk about the writing style. I don't understand this either. It is really interesting. I really didn't understand the reward for your return home, but it doesn't matter. After all, it can be said to complete the background of the protagonist. After all, the length is not very long. But after you came back, you kept going and stopping, and the last scene was not the same. I really can't understand what you want to do. Maybe I am not suitable for your routine, but to be honest, the chapters after you do not have the same feeling as you did at the beginning! I can only say goodbye by fate. I hope you can write a unique routine, 🙂🙂

It's okay for e-sports players to take a year off! It's so funny!

I did feel what I wrote before, but I always felt weird when I read it. When I saw the hope written in the paragraph about going home, I realized why it was weird. The national server is all Chinese, but what you wrote is that EDG Double C is Korean aid. It's not that you don't like it, but shouldn't the hope of the Chinese people be carried by Quanhua? It feels a bit contrary to the theme, just a personal opinion.