Dream of the Red Chamber: Becoming Daiyu's Mentor

1. Character design: The character design of the protagonist is really weird. In the scene of rescuing Lin Ruhai, he was arrogant as a miracle doctor at the beginning, but later he was timidly driven out by Lin Ruhai, who was almost humiliated. This plot finally made it possible for Daiyu to become a disciple. She went back to fight with Lin Ruhai, but within a few words she was led by the nose again, and she was dismissed in a few words. You are summoned out of nowhere to become your son-in-law. In ancient times, you would just point your nose at you and call you a useless coward. The protagonist is also surprised? Later, when he was treating Qin Keqing, he still patted his chest and said that he couldn't see the behavior of Jia Zhen and Jiarong and his son and wanted to save her life. Even if you said that you have a big feud with them, it was more reliable than this reason. Earlier, he insisted that Xue Pan was drunk and causing trouble and was beaten up. How could the Xue family, who was hiding from trouble by staying in the Jia family, have the courage to come and provoke the guests of the Jia family?! Second, the issue of title: Daiyu became a disciple of Miss Lin, Miss Lin, and after rescuing Lin Ruhai, she belonged to Master Lian. When she entered the Jia Mansion, she called her ancestors without saying a few words to Mrs. Jia. She sent a maid, Qingwen, over, and Qingwen called her master Dr. Lin, master. Jiao also said that he asked the maid to call him Brother Lin... You are too cruel to make people laugh. The other names of Lin Ruhai and Daiyu can only be regarded as minor problems, but almost everyone in the book has some problem with the title when chatting with the protagonist, and then they always call someone so-and-so. This kind of plot actually has no meaning at all! Third, the protagonist's abilities: There are three big plots. Lin Ruhai has moved into Jia's mansion after being rescued, and Qin Keqing is about to change her life! The protagonist is still a loser, and the effect of the golden finger has not been unfolded in dozens of chapters. Your protagonist is a loser, which makes readers feel unconfident! It was awesome to say that there were twelve golden fingers, but in the end, even when he wanted to kill Jia Zhenjiarong and change Qin Keqing's life, he didn't even give any ability. Then why is it necessary for your golden finger design to appear? It's purely a matter of deciding on a golden finger as soon as the brain gets hot. If this thing doesn't appear in the early stage, it will purely disfavor it in the later stage. The expectation is placed on the appearance of the golden finger, which is putting the cart before the horse!

I don't know if the few people who gave good reviews were just asking for help, or if I was too picky. At the beginning, the protagonist came to help Lin Ruhai treat his illness, and I didn't understand what it meant. Your protagonist's image is really bad, and doctors in the whole city can't cure it. You took the initiative to come to your door and said that you can cure it. It's normal for others to question your protagonist. The protagonist wants to choke others with saying "leave if you don't want to treat yourself", and also adds that the protagonist is soft and not tough. I really accept it I really don't think this kind of description can describe the protagonist with much backbone. I only see a arrogant and arrogant person. It's completely like I can come to your door to help you treat your illness. It's a blessing you have cultivated for several lifetimes. From this beginning, I can already predict what kind of brainless method will follow.

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At this stage, Jia Lian should have come with a mission (to evacuate the Lin family's property), and would not have any good impressions of the protagonist who can save Lin Ruhai. But it doesn't matter, this is just for fun reading. I can't go into the details of the original work. Put in bookshelf. I feel that the author of this book can probably write 500,000-600,000 words. This is progressing too fast

It's nothing to do with Jia She's affairs to welcome the Spring Festival. Your method is so disgusting, and you PUA yourself, which actually disgusts the readers. This is really shameless.

What a turtle. If you have a golden finger, mention your identity first. People will look down on you everywhere.

If there's anything you want to see, tell me and I'll add it.

Collect them all, don't let go of all 36.

Another fanfic that keeps recruiting girls, which is boring.

Everyone, hurry up and take a look 😌