The Famous Detective Wakes up from a Dream

Good guy, it started to get interesting after Chapter 10. Who thought you could do such a thing? The other one of the double time travellers died, but the protagonist spent 100 reputations to exchange for a rebirth potion to revive him.

Very good... Only a dozen chapters later, there is a whole chapter: Conversation with the system. The second time traveler (he even exchanged his reputation for a potion to save his life). The setting also directly states that nothing can be changed (then what are you doing here). The system has a strong sense of existence and strong subjective awareness. It's really yours, let's go.

The creativity is very good. As for the writing style, I don't know how to write books. At least it is comfortable to read. Before Conan became smaller, I gave it 5 stars. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. The thoughtful system is slightly toxic. This does not mean that thoughtful systems are not good, but very few authors can write thoughtful systems well, so it is considered slightly toxic, but Yes, the pig's feet are clearly arranged by the thoughtful system. Everything is designed. Whatever you smoke is something that can be used to get the direction the system wants the pig's feet to go. He also emphasized many times that the pig's feet should stop struggling. It's useless. What should happen will still happen. You can't change it. If you change it, you will be green.? ? ? ? I looked confused, so forget it, since you can be threatened by the system, you have a good impression of the concubine, right? However, when the concubine appeared on the stage, she looked reluctant? ? ? ? ? ? ? What kind of operation is this? ? You have to be arranged with medicinal wine by the system when you are not happy with it, and then you can't describe the concubine? ? ? ? This is extremely poisonous, like a puppet of the system, the system is the protagonist, so it is difficult to write a thoughtful system. It is easy to control the system when it comes out and occasionally complains. It is like a puppet when it operates a lot of pig feet. Everything is arranged by the system. I give it 2 stars. It is not a brainless thing and I don't like it, but it is still interesting. My personal thoughts are above. Different opinions are welcome to discuss. Civilized society starts from me. I hope the author will write better and better.

The crazy display of Chinese culture at the crime scene really shocked me. Far-fetched

The protagonist is always cheated by the system, which is very poisonous. It's okay to have a battle of wits and courage, you can't be led around.

After reading two chapters, I feel that it is very poisonous to not be able to change. If I can't change the pig's feet, why travel through time? It's not as good as a local protagonist!

The biggest range I can accept is that I can't accept the concubine Yingli behind the assistant at all. . Farewell, hey, I felt very depressed after reading this book. I felt that the protagonist was being led along by the system.

There's a reason why it's not popular. Mixing in a bunch of the author's own personal stuff looks embarrassing.

I said that you, Mouri Kogoro, are Japanese. You always act too fond of him and are too cultural. You will be very unsociable, and all you come into contact with are Japanese policemen.

To be honest, I feel like the author is illogical. After making several mistakes in a row, I wonder how confident Conan is that he will continue to use Mouri Kogoro to solve crimes? Do you think Conan is a fool? Or do you think we are all fools?

I admire the use of love to generate electricity But if you really want to write your own novel, I suggest the author read the ancestor of Conan novels, Forensic Medicine in the Conan World, also known as Animation Fever, which is a book about enchanting blood flowers. It is very early. Basically, all the successful Conan novels now have the shadow of this book. The characteristic of mystery novels is that the logic is self-consistent and unique, rather than adding settings to increase reasoning.

I feel like the author is completely making fun of himself, but the author himself said that he doesn't expect this to make money, it's just for love, and I don't have to say that.

Damn it, the author has more than 1,200 chapters and you didn't put it on the shelves! 6. I can only say: Come on 😡🙏👍

The writing is really average. Kogoro Mouri completely replicates the original Kudo Shinichi in terms of character and function, which is too inconsistent to write.

I feel that some Chinese culture insertions in the front are awkward. I hope it will be better later.

I don't know any professional terminology, and I don't know how to evaluate it. I'm just an ordinary reader. I only read books in my spare time for a few years. I don't know how to comment on this book I just think I'm not scolding you, I just started to get irritated at a certain point and then quit. Maybe your writing is great, but I really can't see it. Come on (●●)

The system is so ridiculous that it completely covers up everything about the protagonist.

You, the author, are still a eunuch. You have written 1.5 Million words, but your results are not as good as others who have written 500,000 words. Moreover, many great masters dare not write about double time travellers, so you can't grasp it.

The system dialogue is too ridiculous, a lot of useless nonsense, and the word count is a bit too much.

The author's writing style is really average, but the changes to the reasoning plot are very good. He has corrected many unreasonable places very well. He has carefully studied reasoning. If you have real cases to study, you may be able to write a great novel. My opinion on the changes to Conan's character is that it is easy to create anti-fans of the Conan Party.