Under the Abyss

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is excellent, the writing is smooth, the story settings are edible, and the details are well handled. It is a very traditional fantasy novel. The pace is a little slow, and some background introductions (such as environmental descriptions) are a little too much. The overall look and feel is good, it has been harvested and can be raised.

It would be better to portray the protagonist in a more obvious way, with a somewhat universal look.

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Great writing and description! The language is fluent and beautiful, and the descriptions are penetrating! It feels great! But you must have a good sense of balance. The character names can be a little special, but don't appear too many, as it will be difficult to leave an impression on the readers! This is true for surnames such as Wu, Chu, etc., But I still praise your talent in naming! Come on!

Support, come on, sit back and watch the male protagonist travel the world with grass roots in his mouth!

What is the original intention of this book? If you want to find yourself a goal to stick to!

Creating a novel is like having a painful dream. You feel sleepy when you wake up, and feel uncomfortable if you don't wake up. The only reason to keep writing is to finish thinking about it, even if no one reads it.

Come on, fatten up and see! ! 🌹

Come on 😁 encourage each other

Today is the fifth day of the new book series, and it is already early in the morning... Hold on, come on!

It's over, it's over, I'm hooked, the story structure and writing are superb.

Adjust your mentality. The most valuable thing about new books is persistence. If you are not satisfied with the chapter, you can rewrite it. If you are not satisfied with life, how can you rewrite it?

I coded two chapters yesterday and got stuck... I reluctantly deleted two chapters and re-wrote them, just think of it as a record! 😢

This book will continue to be written, and it will be written for free if I can't sign a contract. Don't worry, please keep chasing! Although I don't know how many people watched it. 😜

"On How a Snake is Made" Please give me some advice, please give me some advice. Please subscribe to the boss 😢😢

Now that I have raised it to 230,000, I can watch it.

Already collected, keep updated, come on! Mutual income

Pass by and take a dip! (￣O￣) . Z Z

Come on＾0＾~, persistence is victory✌️

As the story goes, the male protagonist of revenge, upgrades his level all the way, and discovers that there is someone else behind the enemy... And each one becomes more terrifying than the last. There are many such routines, but the author's writing style is good, the rhythm is moderate, neither slow nor fast, and it is thought-provoking. However, we still need to put some effort into character creation, and we need to make the characters recognizable. Take your time and work hard together! Mutual encouragement!

Come on, come on, I'm really coming, don't give up

The writing is pretty good and the pace is not sluggish. Just pay attention to checking for typos and punctuation. Come on!

I feel that I am not qualified to evaluate the quality of this book. The writing style is very good. Keep it up and don't collapse. It is definitely a good book. (Indifferent to fame and fortune, just survive the rookie period)

I'm optimistic about you. Come on😊

The story is great, the writing is good, and the structure is grand. Awesome! As a newbie, I have nothing to say, I can only wish you the best to sign a contract as soon as possible.

The plot is very good, the writing is smooth, and the introduction and title are good. I look forward to great performance.

Well written. Collect and start chasing, the eunuch will serve you with a blade!

I've read a lot of books today, and your writing is better. Your writing is smooth and the plot is vivid and vivid. Come on!

I am Tang Xuanzang and I have signed a contract. You are welcome to click on the homepage to take a look.

I read the first 5 chapters 1. The writing is very smooth and the writing style is steady 2. The story setting is very stable, it can be regarded as a traditional fantasy novel, and the development is in place. The performance of the protagonist, the supporting characters and the adventure points are smoothly connected. I have learned a lot 3. I have received it and I am very optimistic about this book.