The Most Powerful Breakup Master in the City

After reading this book, let's talk about this book. From the very beginning, the main character broke up without hesitation, which made my eyes light up. I really liked this rhythm. The same happened later when he broke up with his senior sister. Although it was a bit delayed, it was okay. However, from the 15th chapter when Lin Xixi appeared, it gradually did not meet my expectations. How should I put it? At first, I thought the rhythm of this book was that a breakup made the protagonist become versatile and enter the entertainment industry, or that a literary and artistic hero used his talent to attract a girl and then broke up. However, my feeling about this book changed after Lin Xixi appeared. Also, you are not very good at writing emotional dramas. The protagonist's attitude change is too abrupt, and Lin Xixi's behavior also gives people a sense of stalking. Generally speaking, there are no big problems, but there are too many details that make me feel like something is wrong and I can't tell. Also in the back, the protagonist promised Su Qian not to do anything illegal but agreed to beat up the rich second-generation Li Jiaming. This is a major poisonous point in the book. Going to the amusement park with Lin Xixi later was too boring, so they were skipped directly. The core of this book is the separation of Hands is not about dating. I came in after reading the title of the book. What I wanted to read was that breaking up is not about falling in love. There are still so many girlfriends who fall in love with a girl before they have finished breaking up. Although the purpose is to break up, it is not not to not talk about it, but at least you have to finish dating with your girlfriends, right? After that, the same goes for the actress Jiang Yiran. Since it was discovered that she was dating Lin Xixi, why didn't she break up with her? I have to continue to live in her house, and the sense of inclusion is too bad. I am not shameless enough to talk about my girlfriend living in another girlfriend's house, let alone another girlfriend knowing that you have two boats. The handling here is very bad. The protagonist is not unable to rent a house. What's the problem with gathering and breaking up? I have to rely on Jiang Yiran's family. Above, this long comment may affect your score as the author, please delete it if you don't like it.

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Post a post, cheers for the author, it's normal for newcomers to have poor grades in new books, but to be honest, this book has good ideas and good writing, don't be a eunuch 😃😃😃

Post a post, cheers for the author, it's normal for newcomers to have poor grades in new books, but to be honest, this book has good ideas and good writing, don't be a eunuch 😃😃😃

Brother, don't be a eunuch, the subject matter is quite good. As long as you don't seek death, you will usually get results!

I said it was my first time to read a novel with this theme. So far, it seems to be similar to Chen 🐶's Manual on Growing a Scumbag. I bet that as long as the author doesn't collapse in the later period, this book will be at least golden. Come on, author, the next great person is you.

Lin Xixi committed suicide. What will the protagonist think in his heart? He is a little speechless. It depends on how the author handles it. And she is going to drink to relieve her sorrow. It feels like she wants to completely change and forget the past completely. Don't troll me🙏✌️🤝👍

I think Lin Xixi's appearance in chapters 15 to 20 is too sudden, and maybe the author didn't handle the details well. I always feel that there is something wrong with it, but I can't explain it. I think there is something wrong with the protagonist's change of attitude towards Lin Xixi. The change of attitude is too abrupt and uncomfortable to watch (votes upvoted, don't use the best)

The protagonist was really speechless when he beat up Li Jiaming. I went to search specifically. Those who beat others, or intentionally harm others' bodies, shall be detained for not less than five days but not more than ten days, and shall be fined not less than 200 yuan but not more than 500 yuan; if the circumstances are relatively minor, they shall be detained for not more than five days or fined not more than 500 yuan. Anyone who commits any of the following circumstances shall be detained for not less than 10 days but not more than 15 days, and shall be fined not less than 500 yuan but not more than 1,000 yuan: (1) Beating and injuring others in groups; (2) Beating and injuring disabled persons, pregnant women, persons under the age of fourteen, or persons over the age of sixty; (3) Beating and injuring others multiple times or beating and injuring multiple persons at one time. With Li Jiaming's background, how difficult is it to get the police involved to investigate and conduct surveillance? This is really a poisonous spot. I hope the author will change it.

It's all for self-pleasure. Every woman is more or less a facial expression, and they basically have no brains.