I Am Justice

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The beginning of the new book is very interesting! It even feels much better than the book Becoming a God from the Primitive Tribe that I got into the author's trap. The author's progress is obvious hh. The last book was about the primitive tribe. I think the strongest thing is the setting, which is the author's imagination! Traveling to the primitive world has become the totem of primitive people. I feel that there are two main lines. The first one is about the protagonist watching the primitive people develop step by step under his guidance; the second one is about the protagonist's own growth, the entanglement and friction between the earthly knowledge in the protagonist's mind and this foreign land of heaven, and the final search for common ground while reserving differences. The author really wrote this epic feeling. I just took care of it for a period of time, and then… I finished taking care of it. The ending is so hasty... I feel like at least 1/3 of the story is left unfinished, maybe because the results are not as good as expected... Then today I found out that the author has opened a new trap, and I almost followed it through it. I didn't stop from the first chapter to the end. This idea is kind of great, I feel like it. It feels a bit like Crusoe, and I have also read a book with a similar setting. It is not a mystery, but a relatively niche book with extremely unstable updates. To be honest, I am a little disappointed. I feel that it is not as popular as the author's previous book with a new setting, but I also enjoyed reading it. So I'll give you the investment, rewards, and recommendation votes!

Looking at it so far, there is still a lot of information, which seems quite attractive. Including the current intention, there are traces to follow, and we will pursue it.

It feels a bit like a esoteric simulator

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I'll take a look at it after 50,000 words. It's still in the seedling stage, so it's hard to evaluate.

Let me give you some opinions Don't mention the concept, background, power system and so on. Just mention one point that I personally feel is inconsistent. When the protagonist meets a villain who is on the loose, he will have a "phantom", in which the protagonist can carry out a "second trial" or "promise" Now we know that when the promise is not completed for a relatively long time, the protagonist will face the pressure of death. I personally think this setting will not work. I have roughly considered three development directions and explained them respectively. The first: do not change, that is, keep this exchange: "Bet with your life, swear to destroy the evildoers, and get rewards after the results." It seems fair and reasonable, but the reading experience is poor (in my opinion). Some people may see the protagonist "seeking death" and think that there should be a lot of "Virgin Mothers". The second type: lowering the cost. According to the previous plot, as the protagonist becomes stronger, the cost gradually decreases. This is also a conventional idea. It is quite satisfactory, not outstanding, and not poisonous. It just seems that the previous setting is redundant. It is better to have no cost at the beginning. The third type:. . . . I did something else and forgot about the third option. I clearly liked this development direction the most before. . . Forget it, just write down part of it. I personally prefer the first and third developments. I think this is a good point. Through the choice between "life and death" and "justice", to express the "paranoia" of the protagonist in the introduction, it should be able to effectively shape the character. It will test the author's control of the reader's psychology, right? Also, if this continues and the trial must be carried out as soon as possible, what will the villain do? Of course, time is not the only way to highlight difficulty. Extra: Why did you write such a "heavy" novel again~

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It's quite interesting, let's put it on the bookshelf first!

Collect it first, I'll take a look if it's over 50,000!