A Journey Through the Magical World

There are two paragraphs that are not very comfortable to watch. One was forced by Harry to tutor Hermione Ron. One was beaten by a time traveler. Then I didn't even fart, and I felt like the protagonist was like an old man. Has been helping the protagonist team. The protagonist doesn't do much of his own business. . Just keep reading and help others solve problems. Don't you have your own goals? It's like a reincarnation paradise. The protagonist has been busy doing his own thing. It's very comfortable to watch, if you really want to write a grandfather-type protagonist. It would be great to just write a soul-body old man

Come on! The story feels great! ! ! !

Can you update more chapters at once?

I'm optimistic about you, keep working hard😊 By the way, let's see how many living people there are🤭

Brother, I just want to ask, when you write a novel, have you never considered it to be more enjoyable? At least it should have both positive and negative aspects. I feel that your writing style and the logic of the plot are all fine, but it just makes people feel like they can't stand it. If I bite the bullet and read it, I can only say that you don't have enough excitement, and you really lack something to attract people to read.

It's so pretty, I have to give it a thumbs up!

The contract for signing this book has been sent out. Everyone can contribute. Investors in the new book deserve it 😁

Ei It's strange, I obviously voted for 2 recommendations? ? Why does it show that it was not successful?

It's fine if you write slower, but can you update it first?

Come on! Don't be a eunuch!

Love it, love it! Come on, writer, I will continue to pursue it

Come on, come on, come on^-^ It feels pretty good.

Come on! ｡:.ﾟヽ(｡◕‿◕｡)ﾉﾟ.:｡+ﾟ

The author is very promising~~~

Wanjishen

I just want to say 🙂 Young man, come on 😊

The writing here on The Hobbit is okay. It seems that the author has read it carefully. Come on, I will add a bookshelf.

I think the outline of this book is good, but after reading twenty chapters, I was a little doubtful about the protagonist's low IQ. He can turn Azeroth's predicament into a continuous curse cast by a great wizard by another wizard. . There is absolutely no logic at all. No matter how strong or great a wizard is, he is still an individual. Azeroth is a world, and the ways in which Azeroth is attacked are too wide. He is asking a top wizard in the wizarding world who has a lifespan of more than 100 years. Even if he is the Dark Lord, if he asks this question, the Dark Lord can give a plan for developing a body-snatching wizard at most, right? His understanding can only go so far. If you can't do it anymore, capture another person. It's hard to capture a pure-blood wizard to seize his body. Is Azeroth comparable? His twenty-year plan can be said to be the most difficult plan in the world. Azeroth didn't even finish a yawn? This was a hole that I couldn't fill with my low IQ, and I couldn't fill it with my imagination, but I couldn't bear to put it aside. See Chapter 20. The Soviet Union only has a population of one hundred wizards. . Do you know how big and populated the Soviet Union was at its peak? What I would rather see is that the Soviet wizarding community throws magic nuclear bombs at each other and kills millions of wizards. It is more logical than the so-called rise of a hundred old, weak, sick and disabled wizards. Wizards and Muggles do not interfere with each other. First of all, the general rules of Europe have not been applicable to the Soviet Union since ancient times. Secondly, if the entire Soviet Union only has a hundred old, weak, sick and disabled wizards, stop rising. Dark wizards have long since divided up their chaotic paradise. A confusion spell can turn national leaders into servants. Why is the Soviet Union so big without enough power in the wizarding world? The wizarding world of various countries that doesn't eat fat? Even if the wizarding world is full of paladins, why can't dark wizards join in if they are so unscrupulous? There is also the task given by the protagonist's golden finger. Being a golden finger does not require brains. It doesn't matter how you carry out the task without any problems. But you are a human being. I asked you to teach me. I want to thank you on behalf of the Northern Bear Wizarding World. You agreed to any request and prepared to help others revitalize the world? What is falling from the sky is not a pie but a Man-Han banquet. No one dares to accept it, right? It would be okay if this hole can be filled after twenty chapters, but the two vicious holes I mentioned before have no solution.

Logically speaking, when testing the water and making recommendations, we usually update it once a day →_→

It's okay to write slowly, but you need to update it first.

Keep up the good work and update! Author!

Listen up, at least it's better than the recent TV dramas about Brain C...

What's written here? It's awkward.

The writing style and plot logic are both okay, but there is no gaoc part of the plot. To put it crudely, there is no zb plot.

3 Words, it's a good book... Manually funny hehe

The plot is quite interesting, and the character design has also begun to take shape. Come on

Isn't there a book about the main character becoming a true god? All Warcraft fandoms are stories of small characters, sad and wandering with fate. Some rubbish authors also describe World of Warcraft as a world of martial arts. This is even more nonsense than holding a sword and using the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms to reach the heaven. Have the brains of these gunmen been eaten clean by maggots?

The word count is slightly less. . . Mark it first

I envy posts like this

I don't really like the protagonist's aggressive and plundering style. He feels like he relies on his strength to dominate.