King Shenfeng

I just finished chasing it, and I would like to share my opinion. It is just for reference. After all, it's hard to adjust to a heavy mouth. What's honey to him is arsenic to me. Let me talk about the overall situation first. Compared with the previous book, the quality has dropped. The previous book started with the disbandment of the Yanbian team, and the bitter life of the marginal players was really amazing. The specific points are as follows. 1. The main character is not written in a high-level way, which is an advantage. We are all common people, who doesn't know who? The kind of person who doesn't go out in bars or fuck girls, is strict in self-discipline, treats people well, and inspires the players around him just to improve the level of Chinese football. I'm afraid only PG13 is suitable for such people. 2. Bad reviews of the heroine. I searched 101 on Baidu. Maybe I am really old and there is no one with good looks that suits my taste. Well, Sunmi's legs are pretty good. Who the hell is Li Ziting? Brother, I don't understand your aesthetics. In reality, if a main player in the five major leagues finds an idol, it would be considered equal, but you are a loser. Do you know where you can go? Think about it, if Liu Xiang at his peak teamed up with a big power, who would think Liu Xiang was not worthy? The 110-meter hurdles are a niche in track and field. Can they be compared with football? Besides, is there any difference between Li Ziting and Internet celebrity girls? Isn't the original intention to gain traffic? How come only one really loves green tea? It's okay to be fucked once, but is the heroine too low? Finally, brother, I'm a little confused about your aesthetics. 3. Timeline, flaws, I won't go into details. 4. It's okay to reach your peak right after your debut, but can you give him a little more room to grow? Can he catch up with Mei Chaoluo? 5. There is no system, advantage. The design of the hooker is quite good, just give it a good body, good skills, good consciousness, and endurance attributes, but other systems are not so good. 6. The national team writes truthfully and has advantages. The national team is just a vanity fair. How can any brother work together to win the gold? In the peak year of the national football team in 2002, there was a dispute between Hao Fan and Zhang Xiaorui's leg. Okay, let's just talk about this. The timeline is really flawed. You have already written to the end of 2018. There is still half a season of the Bundesliga and a complete Asian Cup to write about (the top 40 games can also be written about Syria). Besides, you can't waste time while driving. First, the time is too short, and second, the popular traffic is damn old.

Dude, I was chasing your last book, but I chased it to death. Let me make two suggestions. You can consider it yourself. It doesn't matter if you insist on your own opinion. First, isn't the 2018 timeline too close? It develops obscenely for one season, and will be suspended globally the next season. Second, it doesn't matter if the protagonist is a bit promiscuous. Who in the sports circle is not promiscuous, but he can't be taboo about meat and vegetables. Internet celebrities are not cool. Chinese players, let alone Melo level, even Son Heung-min level can be praised to the heavens. If they have a friendship with whoever is a popular CP in the entertainment industry, there will be a lot of coquettish bitches rushing to come.