One Punch Man Journey to the West

Don't hide the protagonist's power, it won't be fun. Is there any other way to write about Saitama's protagonist other than showing off? Can you write about the protagonist Saitama's inadvertent pretense and the feeling that Saitama is a bit silly (indifferently)?

Brother, you have too many spans, right? I write historical novels and then fantasy novels.

I don't know how strong Saitama is in Journey to the West. Wouldn't he be invincible with one punch? That would be boring.

Sometimes I may not fully understand the teacher's character. Please give me your readers' advice so that I can make adjustments in subsequent chapters and strive to fit Saitama's personality. 🙏🙏🙏

I think it can be set up so that Qi Yu and Tang Monk have the same fate, and are of the same sex and repel each other. Only one of them can exist in the same world, so Tang Monk is dead, and the gods and Buddhas in the sky can't tell that Qi Yu is not Tang Monk.

Good luck with the new book, I love One Punch fandom.

Teacher's characteristics: For weirdos, the weirdos will only take action unless they are hostile or attack the teacher, instead of being beaten stupidly.

Grinding grinding Grinning out

The first few chapters are pretty good, come on

It's so weird to hide back and forth! Also, when you first determine the direction, don't you consider the teacher's speed? You can't tell me how fast the teacher is rushing in a punch, right? Why are you taking your time here? ? ? ? ? ?

Remember to notify us when you change locations

Speaking of which, the protagonist's personality is not pure enough (indifferently) and doesn't feel like Saitama.,,

Sun Wukong's character has been changed too much by you, and Sun Wukong's strength has been reduced so much by you. When did Nezha's strength increase? The author is The Devil Boy Comes into the World. Have you seen too much? When did Nezha become stronger than Zhu Bajie, so I'm sure the author is The Devil Boy. I've watched too much. I don't want to talk about Sun Wukong. It's been weakened too much. Sun Wukong's character has been messed up by your changes. Sun Wukong will not be afraid of people like Bodhisattva and Buddha. You have changed the setting too much, and the magic change will not be like this. Anyway, Sun Wukong's character can never be changed so low. Sun Wukong has absolutely no self-awareness, and Sun Wukong's character will not change that much after Tang Monk dies. Sooner or later, if Sun Wukong's character is written, this book will be released to the public. Even if he is suppressed by the Five Elements Mountain for five hundred years, it is impossible. The character has changed so much. In the final analysis, the author's writing is a bit messy. I am really drunk on the character. I will wait for this book to be released. I really can't stand the character of Sun Wukong, so that's it, the end.

I have been saving for a long time, but at the end of the novel I didn't feel any better at all. I thought it was finally a showdown, but it turned out to be a sexy move that made me depressed. It feels like I'm watching the King in the One Punch Man comic and it makes me sick! I like One Punch fandom because I want Saitama to be treated in the novel that she didn't get in the original work 😡 What's the result?

Author, please don't collapse. I feel that the force value has collapsed a bit. That chat group was really good, why did it disappear? Why do you need to learn from experience when you are so awesome?

I read the first chapter. I don't ask for anything to tell the truth, but there is no country or state in One Punch. Don't you know this?

Is the author planning to release a new book?