Son of Wonderland

1. The best introduction is the last paragraph. We are in... This paragraph is better, but the others are not so attractive and have no great features. In fact, I suggest modifying it. 2. Ah! What a headache! Reading such a large paragraph makes my eyes hurt and my head feels swollen. Change it! I really want to persuade you to quit... 3. The content is smooth, but some places are a bit abrupt. 4. The number of words is okay, persistence is victory, come on! Then pay attention to segmentation and be more creative. Because I have read several chapters, there are very few points that attract me, and it is indeed not enough. Take your time and come on ٩( 'ω' )و. Welcome to visit "Warm and Cool". If you can subscribe, thank you.

I worked really hard on rewriting it, I hope someone can read it, and I will make certain changes in the future. Two chapters of updates will be resumed tomorrow at the original time, guaranteed to be stable! Writing is not easy! Please!

In order to improve the reading quality, the following optimizations have been made to address issues such as too long paragraphs, abrupt plots, unattractive introductions, and insufficient highlights: 1. Paragraphs have been deleted or re-divided 2. Added some plot clips to better connect the plot 3. Revised the introduction 4. Modified some plots (Suddenly I discovered that the author can also be said to be a programmer [funny]. I am so tired from editing today) In addition to the above optimization, I will continue to optimize the work, and apologize for the decline in quality of Chapters 9 and 10. I admit that it is because of poor grades that I have been shaken in my heart. Regardless of whether anyone reads it, I will still write it down. In addition, due to today's amazing hand speed, I have to temporarily postpone the original update time. Update time: Chapter 1: 13:00 Chapter 2: 20:00 This announcement is for readers who actually read this book (most likely there will be none)

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It's well written, keep up the good work and keep updating.

Come on, it looks good, keep it up!