Traveling Through the Heavens Starting from Midnight

Alas, it's very uncomfortable, very uncomfortable. As an old fan of Shou Ye, I often look for books about Shou Ye. It's not easy to find a book that is okay. It looked good at first, but suddenly I got into Naruto... Is it wrong to read Zhu Guo or something? It's like I was eating a roast chicken, and halfway through the meal, I found that the belly of the roast chicken was looking up at the stars... It's really uncomfortable. I always feel uncomfortable in my heart when I continue reading. Come on, author, I'll slip away first.

Yes, the writing is good, keep the standard, must subscribe when it is published

I like it very much, but in the first chapter, the male protagonist is too young when he travels through time, but he becomes a literary youth in the night world. Let's talk about the heroine thing. I think we can have two heroines. First of all, why do old bookworms dislike multiple heroines? Because the writing is not good, the amount of pen and ink for emotional drama and character description is limited, and online writers are relatively weak in this regard. What's more, if there are more than one heroine, they can only write according to the mold. There is only one consequence, and it will definitely not be brilliant. Furthermore, fan fiction itself is enjoyable writing, and readers enjoy reading it. People who read fan fiction have favorite characters and regrets about the original work, and want to make up for it through this article. So I personally support the dual heroines Ye Hongyu and Shanshan. Of course, the author must continue to maintain this writing power. Anyway, it is now my favorite book among the Shoye fandoms I have read.

Although the protagonist has no father or mother, he also has both parents. This is how the first one made me feel.

The fantasy world must be added to the animation, it is a bit like I traveled to the ancient world, everyone is cultivating immortals, making merit, and looking for innate spiritual treasures, but I want to be the Pirate King, I want to be Detective Conan, and I want to understand Swastika, get a Digimon ball, catch Pikachu, and then take four Teletubbies into the fantasy world. It feels silly,

Brother, update soon, I'm waiting for your book!

Congratulations on signing the contract. Congratulations on reaching 100 investors. Recommendations have been made.

I'm so annoyed by this kind of thing where everything goes to zero after living through a world. If you weren't the main character, you would die hundreds of times. If you just become a child and have no strength at all, then you can just train yourself.

People who write this kind of fan fiction are really careless, at least they haven't read the original work carefully. Many details are not incorporated at all. First of all, Haotian is not a shepherd, but a rule and a guardian. But she began to have selfish motives. She was afraid that the person she was protecting was too powerful to surpass her. So she activated Eternal Night several times, with the purpose of eating the practitioners who mastered the rules. Above the five realms there is no distance, heavenly demons, apocalypse, immeasurable and pure. This realm includes (the first lecturer, the Buddha, the senior brother, Wei Guangming, the previous headmaster of Xiling, the drunkard, the butcher, Chen, the gambler is also the Taoist ancestor). However, Chen, Buddha and the gambler have gone very far in this realm, so his combat power should be the strongest among them. Next is the Master, whose realm should be called Wuju. But there is a problem here. Realm often does not represent strength. For example, Ke Haoran, Liansheng Thirty-Two, and Sword Master Liu Bai are at the peak of knowing their fate. Although these people are at the peak of knowing their fate, they are more powerful than the average six realms. The author didn't understand this, so he just took advantage of the popularity of the TV series and watched it all. The main character in the book licks all kinds of things, but the key is that he likes to show off forcefully, and the emotional scenes are really a mess. Since I like Mo Shanshan, I should write this relationship in a pure and perfect way, and don't describe the character like a nightclub princess. If I treat you well, I'll kiss you. It's so disgusting. I don't know why people who write time travel novels have a bad habit. Thinking that everyone is equal, thinking that you look down on those who are better than you, or being a peddler and a mere pawn, all have the same attitude. Come on, if you want to be a billionaire, I don't believe you will look down on those struggling at the bottom or treat them equally. As long as there are people, there will be classes, and neither ancient nor modern people can change this. Unless you are really in your fifties or sixties and worth hundreds of billions, then you are qualified to say such things. Otherwise no one can keep their true nature. The more a person struggling at the bottom quickly becomes a member of the upper class, the faster he will adapt to the sense of superiority brought about by this class enslavement of the bottom. Instead of sticking to your heart, you have to travel through time and become a big shot. In the first few days, you may not be able to adapt to being served by a group of people and groveling. But believe it or not, it won't be long before you can accept how to enslave and exploit them with peace of mind. Okay, not much else to say, if you like Jiang Ye and want to continue reading, just watch it. It's poisoned, don't blame me.

I am invincible in the world. If I don't love mountains, I love Quni.

The part about Pegasus being robbed was very confusing. Others have robbed you of your things, so you still make a bet with others? Why should I put my own things out for bets, when I am stronger than everyone present?

I hope you don't write about the Master rising to the sky and turning into the moon. Then the novel would have no meaning. The protagonist should be killed by a piece of tofu. He has already traveled through time and still can't change the ending.

Writing fan fiction is fantasy, and fairy tales are fairy tales. Doesn't the author think it's poisonous to insert some two-dimensional power things into this kind of martial arts world all day long? It's as outrageous as a rich and handsome man wearing a suit and riding an electric car to deliver food.

Why do you feel weaker and weaker after breaking through the Five Realms? The Spiritual Realm is not much stronger than the others, it may even be weaker.

Ye Hongyu successfully transformed from a Taoist madman into a love madman

I hate plots where the originally strong protagonists run away to another world inexplicably and then start training all over again.

The protagonist is what he is. If there is an additional protagonist, what should happen will still happen. Following the plot, there is just one more person to deal with the protagonist. Because the protagonist also puts others in more danger, it feels like the protagonist is the broom star.

Well written, a rare fan of Jiang Ye

I have no idea what Jiang Ye is, and I have never read it. I have not read any of the online articles on cultivating immortals starting from Mortals (only a little bit), including the subsequent novels such as Zhetian. That is simply cultivating demons. The world of cultivation is already like the demon world. You can imagine what the fairy world will become. . There is a feeling of disgust and sadness.

Isn't the protagonist just a gatekeeper? Why does he still need to worship his master? Fuck you. Didn't they fight at the end? Who will the protagonist help then?

The early stage was very good, but later on I stopped being a human being. I was also drunk because of the Master. It's really floating at the back. The more it floats, the more rubbish it gets, and the more it floats, the more speechless it becomes.

After killing the immortal, it is better to choose the heaven

I saw where you first learned about the universe, so I wanted to ask, but it required a value of 100, so I had to skip and look at the back. So what I want to ask is: "What universe did you see? Is it the "beginning" or the "end" or "destruction" or "return to ruins", or "endless" and "star sea" are the specific states of the universe. If it is a sky full of stars, this should be visible when you look up.

Back away. I'm going to start showing off

I want to see "Battle of Tangshan" and "Abuse the Master", can you write about it? 😁

Apart from anything else, is it really good to be with a three-year-old child, red fish?

Where's the promised Douluo 🙂

The writing is very good. It doesn't follow the usual routine and takes a different approach. After all, all the worlds are basically badly written. It's not easy to express your feelings.

Please update it carefully, I've seen more than 50 photos and it's pretty good!