Rebirth of the Infinite Martial Arts World

The writing is so rubbish. I never comment. I can't help it.

Song Qingshu traveled through his childhood, becoming a proper rich second generation? Golden start. Practicing Wudang secrets casually and being taught by the top master Zhang Sanfeng is ten thousand times better than being a common beggar through time travel. What else do you want?

Let's not talk about the book. Just the protagonist's avatar will turn off 80% of readers. It's so disgusting.

Why does the book become more and more poisonous as it is written? It was good at first, but then it became all kinds of poisonous.

What did the author write? Highly toxic. The waste material has been passed down and kept being soy sauce. The plot has not changed at all. It is just like this. The protagonist is a mess. The author is welcome to find fault. I just want to ask you if I am right. Isn't it good for me to watch the original version if I have that time? I'll use you to get some useless guy to watch the plot.

Well, internal strength and body should be learned by Song Qing. Isn't zhanzhuang meant to exercise the body and lay the foundation? The protagonist has traveled through time as a soul, why are his body belongings lost? Weapons are an extension of fists and kicks, shouldn't you learn fists and kicks first? The protagonist is a master of swordsmanship, and he is obsessed with it. How many weapons are there in Class 18, and how many exotic weapons are there! Baguazhang's Yuanyang Yue, Wing Chun's Eight-Zhan Dao, Xingyi Quan's Linjiao Dao, and Baji Quan's Spear. It's not necessary to argue, but I just want to say that these familiar boxing techniques use less swords! You can't say that what I'm talking about can't be put into practice!

Wanyan Kang, Murong Fu, and Wan Gui are the most suitable bodies for time travel. Don't seek justice. Since you are a villain, fight to the end. Murong Fu will revive Dayan. Wanyan Kang even wants to be the emperor of the Jin Dynasty. His grandmother is Jin Yuanfei Li Shier. The emperor likes Li Shier. Just like Wanyan Honglie likes Bao Xiruo, Wanyankang is the only candidate for the crown prince of Dajin. That Yang Tiexin planned to have Ke Zhene killed by mistake. Don't let their father and wife meet. How come they have been preparing for so many years and are still foresighted? Can't they still keep the secret?

Personal Thoughts I feel that the ending of each world of the protagonist is too stiff. I was stunned for a while while watching it. I hope the author will pay more attention to this aspect. Speaking of the protagonist's inner demons breaking out in the last world, the author's protagonist should be a scholar in the next world. He needs to be the kind of person who grew up, so that he can better solve his inner demons. Jianghu has never been above the temple and far away from the rivers and lakes.

Zhang Wuji's father and mother died in front of them because of their incorrect outlook. First reaction. It's bullying him. The protagonist, the girl he has been feeding with for two years, ruins her appearance. She is simply disgusting and has unhealthy outlook on life, which makes people want to vomit.

The plot has not changed. If you travel through time, you should still let everyone read the original work. I advise everyone not to read it.

After testing the poison, discard it. There is a chapter in it, where Yang Guo worships at the door of the ancient tomb, and then Grandma Sun goes to the Quanzhen Sect to deliver medicine for him, and then is beaten to death, exactly like the original work. The main character is not here. The reason is because he knows that the master is going out to avoid the limelight. Gee, the author doesn't know what he thinks. It's too poisonous.

I feel addicted while watching it. The protagonist always thinks that Zhang Wuji is the son of the plane. In fact, to be honest, if he is still the son of the plane, there is no need to be reborn. All kinds of plots are killing me. If I want to read these, won't I read Jin Yong's book? When reading fan fiction, why not just read an adaptation?

This is a twisted protagonist, and I don't understand what the author wants to write. . The protagonist is mentally ill.

Good guy, this is the first time I've seen someone copying a novel. All the important plots were copied, Zhang Wuji was replaced by Song Qingshu, and everything else remained unchanged. Poisoning at Green Willow Villa, teasing Zhao Min in the dungeon, using the Seven Insects and Seven Flowers Cream, agreeing to Zhao Min's conditions, rescuing people at Wan'an Temple, looking for the dragon-slaying knife on Binghuo Island, all the same. Travelers have no advantage at all, even if they know the plot, they still fall into the trap. Even worse than Zhang Wuji, all three girls except Zhuer fell in love with Song Qingshu, and then they left and went to another world. How can you still persist in writing like this?🙂

To be honest, the SB protagonist, in order to change the plot layout in advance, ended up being plot-killing. Let me ask you how you came up with this kind of SB plot.

Most of it is copied from the original work, and the plot basically has no major changes. The protagonist has no sense of existence at all, and the more you watch it, the less interesting it becomes 😴😴

Times have changed. Jin Yong's narrative style is no longer attractive. You can write stories, but don't learn from Jin Yong's narrative style. It looks boring and boring. Jin Yong's fame lies in the national conditions of our country at that time. There is a cultural gap. However, with the rise of online literature, Jin Yong's style now looks very embarrassing.

I read the free chapter, and since you didn't change Zhang Cuishan's death, I didn't want to read it. The protagonist was just trying to mess around the whole time, which was of no use. Even if I skipped to read later, I found that it was still the same, so I said goodbye. If I continue writing like this, I feel like I won't be able to improve, and readers will be annoyed.

The writing is very fresh and refined. . . . . Forgive me as a lay person who cannot understand. . In Chapter 59, he went back to the mountain to confront him, and then besieged the Mingjiao. . . . . To be honest, I'm just a lay person and I really don't understand what this means. . . . The protagonist's participation in the plot is also too low. . Zhang Cuishan and Yin Susu were still dead, and Zhang Wuji was caught running down the mountain. . . . How could a person without internal strength win in a martial arts competition in the Wu-Tang Clan in a martial arts world where internal strength is the main focus? . . I really don't feel that this internal strength is of any use except for a little more lethality. As for the light kung fu and the speed of the moves, the internal strength after practicing for more than 10 years is not as good as that of a time traveler who has only practiced sword moves for 2 years. . . This time traveler seems to have been an ordinary person in his former life. He has no cheats or adventures. In three months, he can surpass the swordsman among the Seven Heroes of Wudang in terms of moves. . . . Later, eating Persian snake gall is even more ridiculous. . . Back then, Yang Guo ate food that was caught by the Divine Eagle Gang. The food he ate was still the kind that had to be transformed into essence. People whose meridians were damaged and could not practice internal energy could digest the Persian snake. . . The more he talked, the more he almost wanted to say, forget it. . . . This book is really for gods to read, there is so much to think about. . .

The most unacceptable thing is the Divine Condor. Once in the Divine Condor Scroll, he keeps causing trouble but only half of everything is done. Damn, let alone interfering in the court, just to stop Li Mochou in the case of the Lu family, your mother is really trying to stop you. You decided to help the Lu family in the first place and then you wholeheartedly helped! After helping someone's wife die, Wu Santong died again. In the end, Cheng Ying and Lu Wushuang made it even more hilarious by giving it to Li Mochou. Just because she doesn't hurt her doesn't mean he will teach her something! After that, Cheng Ying was directly thrown to Uncle Lu. Damn, if you don't want to help, don't cause trouble. Originally, all of them died, but in the end, what's the difference between leaving two people alone and all of them dead? Lu Wushuang's father is like losing his daughter! It was even more funny after that, after Yang Guo became his disciple, he allowed Yang Guo to go to the ancient tomb, and then ran away directly, leaving Quanzhen to face the ancient tomb again! After that, Granny Sun died again. I don't know what the so-called luck is. Author, you are not a woman. Her mother runs away every time after flirting.

After watching so many stories about Yitian traveling through time, I feel that as long as they were worn after the Wang Panshan incident, not many people regard Yu Daiyan as a human being. They clearly know how to save Yu Daiyan, but they don't say anything about it. They have to wait until the plot begins to solve the problem. If he is not from Wudang or it doesn't matter, it's fine. One or two people went to Wudang, but he was paralyzed for ten or eight years. I am really speechless.

I just want to say one thing, you can write 900,000 words for such a bad novel author, thank you for your hard work, author!

It's like watching the abbreviated version of Jin Yong again, from beginning to end there is only one word: frustration. Let's not talk about the writing style, just say that every transition is a bit stiff. Among them, I could not bear to go through the free chapters of Yitian, but when it came to the paid plot of the Condor, I couldn't complain and felt like I had lost 1 million! The protagonist is just a show-goer, with no purpose and no main line. In martial arts, shouldn't we be happy with our grudges? If the protagonist wants to take the villain route, it can be said that it is for his own benefit to not touch the plot. But the protagonist here should want to take the route of normal views, and just let Granny Sun be beaten to death? Saving Ouyang Feng can still mean that the master cannot be insulted. What does it mean that a villain like Zhao Zhijing can survive to the end of the chapter? Every important moment, I would find an excuse to disappear. It was really frustrating to go from Lu Wushuang to Jueqing Valley. Mr. Jin Yong wrote that the divine eagle is in disrepair and has not been seen alive and dead for 16 years. Do you have to do it again? This is not a novel, this is an outline! I have read novels for so many years, and this is my first time to comment on it. It is really uncomfortable to read. I hope the author will reconsider his own style and intention! It's also an explanation for yourself.

It is not recommended to spend money to watch it. The more you watch it, the more frustrating it becomes. The more the protagonist travels through time, the more rubbish he becomes. The accumulation of each world is turned into a dog and eaten by the author.

What kind of rubbish is this? If you say you traveled through Yitian, then you will travel through Yitian. If you write it carefully, it will be over! It had to be reformed all at once, but it was bullshit. After reading the first eleven chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

I think the writing is pretty good? Thanks to the author for reviewing Mr. Jin Yong's masterpiece for us! It's a pity that there is an extra protagonist, which is quite annoying!

The erotic book 🤫 is really boring. The original book either shouldn't be written or has been completely changed. There is a reason for rushing. It's okay to not be enterprising and not listen to the comments. If you imagine that you are writing something stupid, the most terrible thing is that the readers don't know the stuff.

The writing is not good, I force myself to be crooked, the sentences are not smooth, the content is not attractive, and it is messy.

When I saw the protagonist in Chapter 1 sighing and crossing his legs, he looked like a useless piece of trash.

The writing is quite good so far. I feel good about the protagonist who understands his identity and plays a steady role. Support a wave, come on the author👍👍