Original Beast

I feel like the more I write, the more I feel 😏 If you like it, please give it a good review!

If there are some parts of the new book that I am not satisfied with, I hope readers will criticize me generously and I will work hard to improve. Yours sincerely, Shark😁

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The original ferocious beast. Original is not necessarily good. It's best to stay alive. A young man's growth history. The description of the boy's background should be better. For example, the boy is a beast. A sky-devouring beast. When it was born, it was about biting the world. Blood and tears. Just like you suffered as a child. When you reach adulthood, you will return this suffering to the world.

Suggestions: Just read the first chapter 1. So what, divide it into more paragraphs and see what the big guys wrote, it will make your eyes dazzle 2. As a new author, a book like yours cannot quickly get to the topic in the first chapter. . It is easy to be passed directly, there is no sense of substitution, and it is a bit unclear. After all, everyone is used to the fast pace. 3. After a quick glance, the writing style is not a big problem. Come on~