Douluo's Sword Edge

I hope the author is not a eunuch, the book is very interesting

I have arranged for Zhuqing, but don't make random guesses. The heroine of this book is Bibi Dong, a single heroine. What is written in the introduction, can it still be false? Don't force me to spoil it. Really, I don't want to say it. If you ask the heroine or the harem in the future, I won't answer. What if you knew in advance? Do you want me to tell you all the settings? Then what else are you watching? The story of this book is not even the beginning, there is still a long way to go. I haven't written it down, so don't jump to conclusions.

By the way, I don't understand the significance of the protagonist joining Shrek Academy. The Spirit Hall is so good. You can get everything you want. You also know where Tang San's cheats came from. You can definitely ask Bibi Dong to send people to get them. With your own strength, you can go to the Star Dou Forest to hunt spirit beasts. At that time, you can participate in some competitions or something. The Spirit Palace has even external soul bones. Shrek has everything he wants. This operation makes me confused. Practice your sword skills at home and wait for the cheats to come. Why did you lose the watermelon and pick up the sesame seeds?

This thing is really poisonous. Not a relative or an acquaintance, you teach people Hongmen's magical skills. You also randomly find a reason to look at others and teach them that you are against them because they are not related to you. Then you just ask people, I may kill you in the future, are you sure you still want to learn from me? Such a stupid question. I really don't understand why you choose to teach him. Do you think Tang San's mental skills were handed over to the other seven monsters? So you have no emotional foreshadowing and no explanation. You gave him this kind of mentality for no reason. Well, this is where I'll start. I don't want to see it at all. Even if you really want to teach him, right? You can also buy some foreshadowing, right? Even if you write a short paragraph of emotional experience. You are not that kind of thing. At first glance, you feel that the male protagonist is just... Casually teaching people how to do things. I don't want to be able to change it while sitting down. Just if this book is finished and you want to write other books, don't do this, okay. I can't say anything. Anyway, there are definitely people who like to watch this kind of plot, but they don't like me. I just wrote this paragraph to let people who see this paragraph know the plot and see if they will continue to watch it, because no one likes it. The plot of this book is very heart-warming at the beginning, it makes people read it, I kind of like it, but then when I saw the plot I mentioned, I was immediately disgusted, as if I had been fed shit. No one likes this feeling, I hope the author can understand, and I don't hope the author will not delete this comment, okay. If that's okay, can you please reply? You reply and you let me understand why you taught him, what feelings you have remain unchanged, what is the original reason why you taught him, don't say it, just because of the words of that sword spirit. What? I took a fancy to his state of mind. Don't say that it's a big deal. I will teach him personally. Did you forget that you said in the previous picture that this sword bastard cannot stay two meters away from the protagonist?

I keep saying look at the back, look at the back, please, you have already discouraged many people before. If it weren't for seeing you saying that the heroine is Bibi Dong, I would have stopped watching it. If you have any questions, don't push it away. OK. Look at the back, look at the back, the front is already poisonous enough, and there are very few people who can look at it. In the beginning of Wuhun Palace, you have to go to Shrek Academy to hang out. You can also detect intelligence and report back to Bibi Dong. He used his power to kill Tang San, Old Rabbit and Tang Hao first, and he got a hundred thousand year soul ring and two hundred thousand year soul bones. But from what I see now, it is definitely not developing like this, and I am with the group again. Hong Xuangong's skills are good, and the physical body is good. It must explain that the soul power is only level 28, and it has been absorbed by the physical body and the Ghost Sky Sword. But why don't you think about how many resources Wuhun Palace has, with Bibi Dong's backing. What resources do you need that you can't have? Can't you get the immortal grass from Liangyiyan? If you want to say that no one knows you, then Ju Douluo will know. Then how could such a powerful force as Wuhun Palace and the tens of thousands of years of history of the entire continent go unrecorded? Only Tang San's martial arts world in another world knows these fairy grasses? I'm really drunk. Looking back, I couldn't bear it anymore and had no choice but to give up. Originally, when I saw the heroine Bibi Dong, I thought I could come up with a different style.

The author wrote this book really well. It just updates very slowly. I hope Zhu Zhuqing can also become one of the female protagonists. She is my favorite female character in this book. Dai Mubai is not worthy of her. I hope she can be with the male protagonist. Is there something bad about cat-eared girls? Although Bibi Dong is also great, I also hope that the protagonist can have another lover of the same age. The beauty of first love. Bibi Dong and him were both teachers and friends. Xiao Zhu should be in a beautiful and pure love. (Come on, update faster.)

This book is very good, I like Bibi Dong very much, and it is said that a single woman must be a single woman. Now it is difficult for Bibi Dong to be with the protagonist, and the protagonist Kuang has a woman. I don't think Bibi Dong will share men with other people, and I don't want the male protagonist to accept women when he sees them.

I think writing a book is really good, at least the combat power is normal, unlike other combat powers that collapse at the beginning, especially those with perverted ones that start with ten thousand year soul rings, so this book is quite normal, and growing up in the Wuhun Palace is also good. In fact, not everyone in the Wuhun Palace is bad, but their stance is different. The Wuhun Palace helps civilians awaken their martial spirits for free, and you can receive monthly subsidies for becoming a soul master. In the original book, Tang San destroyed the Wuhun Palace for his own personal vendetta, but the civilians were unable to do so. Bearing the cost of awakening martial souls, the Shrek family is the only one. The Tang Sect has forgotten its original intention. The empire is still as corrupt as ever. Only wealthy nobles can become soul masters. Common people have no money to awaken martial souls. Moreover, after the proliferation of soul masters, they cannot be controlled, which leads to the emergence of a large number of evil soul masters in Dou Er. Now the Wuhun Palace not only helps civilians awaken for free, but also is willing to train those with qualifications for free, and also adopts orphans. Which force can do this? The existence of Wuhun Palace is also responsible for controlling soul masters. Besides, there will always be worms in any snobbery, so Tang San's approach is too selfish, and he has no grudge against Bibi Dong. His mother was forced to death by Qianxunji. Besides, Qianxunji is also dead. Tang San is selfish. His enemies are dead and he won't even let his family members go. Why can't he reconcile with Wuhun Palace? So I think this book is very good because the protagonist is on the side of the Wuhun Palace. Most of the other Douluo fans are trying to support Tang San in destroying the Wuhun Palace. The book is good but not very popular. This may be because the author is too slow to update. I suggest that if the author has time, it is better to do it twice a day, or to update it as soon as it is released.

Sword edge, sword edge. Reading depends on fate. Dependence arises from time to time, and it is gone when it ends.

Can you kill Tang San and Xiao Wu?

I'm a little confused. Isn't the pig's trotter a disciple of Bibi Dong? How do you plan to write now, Nishi? Tang San killed your master and you watched? How good is your relationship with them? Forget it about Zhu Zhuqing, she is a junior sister after all, what about the others? Don't understand? Don't understand? What's so good about Shrek? Teacher source? Resource? Nothing you want. If Tang Hao is not dead, his relationship with Wuhun Palace will be hostile, and if he is dead, it will be even more hostile. Don't say it has nothing to do with the pig's feet, they are all from the Wuhun Palace. When the avalanche occurs, no snowflake is innocent.

In fact, I think it might be better not to use the system. After all, if you rely on the system, the protagonist won't have to work hard.

From now on, Qian Renxue will call Ling Yu daddy, and it scares me just thinking about it. My younger brother will become my father, my sister will become my daughter, and my godmother will become my wife. All I can say is that my brother Xiong is so adorable, so powerful.

The last few chapters didn't feel good. We first saw the protagonist practicing for so many years and being crushed by various strong forces. Then he was knocked down by someone with a skill. Zhu Zhuqing, who had been practicing for several months, beat the opponent. This gave the reader a bad feeling. First of all, the protagonist should have a sense of reason, not act recklessly. The protagonist had been practicing for so many years, and there was a big boss behind him. What we wanted to see was the protagonist winning, with IQ crushing strength, rather than the protagonist being bullied by the opponent. A person who had practiced for several months was beaten. Someone who can defeat the protagonist. If the protagonist is not good enough in terms of strength or talent, he must at least crush the opponent in terms of money and intelligence. What our readers want to see is crushing the opponent in terms of IQ, money ability, and power. I hope the author will take some advice.

Great love for Bibi Dong😌😌😌

Is the protagonist a teenager? Adopted, educated, and raised by Bibi Dong, the protagonist became like a parent and child. As a result, the protagonist told Bibi Dong that I wanted to go out and gain experience, and then joined Shrek Academy. Want to please both sides and live in peace? Xiao Wu's mother Bibi Dong killed her, how to calculate the hatred? How can it be considered that Tang San's mother was killed by Wuhun Palace? The hatred of killing his mother is irreconcilable. Is it possible for Tang San Xiaowu to give up this grudge and not avenge his biological mother? [The original book tells everyone that it is impossible. No one with a conscience can let go of the revenge of killing his mother. The only way to end is to kill Bibi Dong to avenge Xiaowu's mother, and to destroy Wuhun Palace to avenge Tang San's mother] The deadlock between Wuhun Palace and Tang San Xiaowu is irresolvable. Of course this is your fan work. You can write it however you want. You can also find various reasons for the two parties to resolve conflicts, but no matter what, it is poisonous to most readers. Come on, author.

I hope the update will come soon, I'm looking forward to it

And I just want to say, is this protagonist still able to play in the end? I feel that this protagonist is going to fall. He will completely join Shrek tonight. Author, please think about it!

Author, I like your book very much. Just write it according to your own. After all, fandom is to make yourself happy. Your ideas are also very good. Come on, author, Zhuqing is so cute. Awsl has so many desserts.

Borrow a building to push a book, start with Douluo.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Blow the roots, blow the roots, blow the roots, blow the roots, blow the roots.

The author must remember the single female protagonist Bibi Dong you mentioned

I can't stand it anymore. After all, this is Douluo World. It's acceptable if you involve the Hongmen setting, but it only involves skills and weapons. The Crow King is too much. You must know the principle of "too much is not enough".

I feel that the writing is quite good, but you wrote the fanfic too late. The craze for Douluo fanfics started very early. Nowadays, not many people read it, and the search for books is not as intense as before. Opening a new book, breaking away from Douluo, although there are fewer people who want to read fanfiction, there are also fewer restrictions. Those who don't read Douluo Fans can't read it and don't click in.

I'll rub you in a circle. I can't understand it a little bit, and I can't understand it more and more.

I was so dumbfounded🙂

What I'm thinking is, isn't it good to just have one kind of martial spirit? It's okay even if your soul power is not high! How can you play with two souls and ten fulls! A cool outfit will work too! You can add nine soul rings! Red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple, black and white! Finally a red one! Defense, attack, recovery, gain, debuff! Not strong? Just follow Daliu!

Dear author, your writing is very good. I like reading it very much. Ignore the other discordant voices and cheers up＾0＾~

If you write it this way, are you going back to the original work?