Online Game Knight Warriors

The status of the contract has been changed today. Everyone's starting coins should have arrived. Here is Oli! ! !

I would like to make a few suggestions, 1. The protagonist's golden finger has a special login device, advanced consciousness, and various strategies, but what is shown in the early stage is not out of the ordinary, which makes it not exciting enough and may lose readers 2. The outline of the Knight's Soul is not enough. The readers have no concept of the Knight's Soul and have narrow cognition. The suspense is not attractive enough 3. Telling the protagonist's past life all at once can easily confuse readers, or they may feel that the protagonist is too cowardly and nagging. The repayment to parents, relatives and friends should be written as real things, otherwise the promise will make people feel that there is nothing now and empty words The author is still in the early stages of creation, and I hope to provide help. Writing novels is not an easy task. It is always easier said than done. I hope this book will achieve better results in the future👍👍👍

After Qing Yi said it, I took a look. Overall, I feel good. I hope you can follow your own path. You are only a freshman and there is a lot of room for development in the future. Don't be afraid, don't hesitate. The more you are afraid and hesitant, just do it. There is no problem in this world that cannot be solved. Come on, I am optimistic about you.

There are so few scenes with the female protagonist. I've almost read a hundred chapters and there's nothing happening with the female protagonist. The male protagonist doesn't even ask her for her game ID. Can she add her as a friend? Didn't you know that the heroine is also playing?

Some suggestions for the author: Maybe the author is confused by now whether he should write about traditional online games or what to write about. The most recent chapters sometimes refer to The King, and sometimes refer to Chicken Fighting. If readers of this book want to read these, why not go directly to these fan fictions. Might as well go back to the beginning. This is just a suggestion and the author can consider it.