I May Have Played a Private Server

The three negative reviews in the book club actually made me think this book was somewhat interesting. After looking at it carefully, it's actually not bad. Real-life scenes are indeed poorly written, but this is also the norm in online game novels. It is rare to see real-life scenes in online game novels written well. The main content is still well written, and the style is somewhat similar to Da Fei's, but I think the style of this book is more to my taste.

Indiscriminately picking yin and replenishing yang is more toxic. It's okay if there are few people, but what about more people? Or the percentage is forced to deduct the month. It doesn't mean that the protagonist can be invincible and have teleportation, so he can go to the strongest boss in seconds. It feels like Fl does not consider the consequences. It's not long, so fix it quickly. The character of the protagonist is also a very speechless point.

Brother, the Xia Ji you wrote is too poisonous. I can't bear it, so I'm leaving. If you don't change your book, it will become useless sooner or later.

What I admire most about the author is that he has finished the book! It can be regarded as having a beginning and an end. I won't mention how it was written. After all, the new author needs to understand it! I feel good that I can finish the book and explain the main plot of the book even if I can't hold on anymore! At least he didn't say anything and then entered the palace! No matter how many readers there are, at least give them an explanation! Thumbs up for you!

What the hell, what are you writing about? Chapter 8 is too poisonous, why keep it with zero loyalty? It's disgusting for readers, right?

Recommended for beginners, I skipped it.

Just delete the first three chapters, so that more people can see the fourth chapter, although I don't know what the fourth chapter is.

I saw a lot of people criticizing you and calling you rubbish. I won't criticize you, please write faster.

The character of the protagonist. . . And there is no data in the game text. . Also, I don't know if I'm writing about games or cities...

How can I put it, the first few chapters are indeed very poisonous, but the rest is still good. Come on, author

After reading thirty chapters, I still haven't seen anything exciting. Li Linjuan's lease renewal is also confusing. If the landlord were my ex-boyfriend and he was venomous after we broke up, I would definitely not renew the lease. Like others, I feel that an online game article has been written as an urban article, and there are no highlights 😅.

I've read Chapter 26 and can't hold on anymore, so I say goodbye.

Too much nonsense. And I didn't see any cheats anywhere. Where is the private server? Reported

I saw more than ten pictures and I really can't stand it anymore 😓😓😓

After reading ten chapters, I feel that the author has used ten chapters to describe the setting of the protagonist who is stupid, rich and lucky very clearly. And the settings of the four professions are also different from many novels. If you feel interested, continue reading. I will come back and post when I get to Chapter 50. 😁

Li Linjuan is too poisonous. Damn it, author, I beg you, please don't feed her. Others are fine. I can't even stand this episode when Li Linjuan is sick.

First, there is no novice tutorial for the game, and game enthusiasts don't check the information? Second, Xia Ji has 0 loyalty and no longer belongs to this territory. She doesn't know how to kill? Thirdly, I feel that the NPCs in the territory are just a bunch of code programs, and Xia Ji is still there. Her IQ is not enough or there is a personality conflict. Fourth, is it impossible to defeat a construction game without mercenaries in the early stage? What did the first lords do? The first batch of mercenaries is also in the early stage. The mercenaries recruited by the protagonist are definitely not novices, so the first batch of mercenaries recruited by the lord must be novice mercenaries. So why can they win?

The supporting character's IQ is off the charts, the protagonist is stupid and rich, and it's painful to watch.

Brother, your writing is pretty good. I saw Chapter 37. So far, I feel quite comfortable with it. There are not too many poisonous points or a lot of typos. The writing style is also good, but your grades are a bit poor. I'm really afraid of your tj. Keep at it! By the way, push back the space mode as much as possible, or don't write it at all, because there are too few people who like the combination of your early settings and the star field. I don't like it very much, come on!

? I write whatever comes to my mind. After I finish it, I feel bad, and I make various changes. After the changes are completed, the readers don't like it, and the author doesn't feel good either. Later, I add various settings, and in general it's just random writing.

Updates are too slow. If you are slow in typing, just give me the manuscript and I will type it for you. The ink will be very stained.

It's not easy, so many people still insist on writing

The author really uses love to generate electricity!

No need to say anymore, all orders are supported!