Escape from Elbvoz

Very different writing style, support it. However, the character dialogue really made me dizzy.

Should I create a Q group messaging setting?

I think you can read books by the French novelist Jules Verne, such as "Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea", "Around the World in Eighty Days", "Captain Grant's Children", which are very similar to your novel style, and "The Count of Monte Cristo" by Alexandre Dumas🤝

I guess the whole plot is about being shipwrecked and then escaping, like in "Robinson Crusoe" or "Gulliver's Travels"?

You have a common problem among novices. If you don't divide it into paragraphs, it will be difficult for people to read, and you won't have the courage to read on! The number of words in one chapter is too few. I personally recommend about 2,000 words. You can read it yourself. The number of words in the main text is not as much as the prequel!

The author is a little busy these days 🤓

The plot and everything are pretty good, but are there too many symbols? You have to work harder.

I won five million in the lottery and got a house worth one million. I became a eunuch and that's it... Okay, I'm just going to write apocalyptic novels. This article is just to practice. I still prefer to write apocalyptic novels. Suspense is not suitable for me. The name is "Anonymous and No Years". See you at work.