Heavenly Demon Refining Dao

Ah, keep writing, getting ready for the first little baby! Flirting author! Is anyone watching?😵

I watched it, and it looked okay at first, but the way the male protagonist traveled through time was a bit inexplicable (a bit unconventional). The plot is remarkable, the storyline is smooth and the rhythm is well controlled. Come on, author.

It's a bit uncomfortable. Your opening is a bit bad. The main problem is that you can't understand the words. How can you secretly learn martial arts if you can't understand the words? Is it enough to just watch others perform actions? If you can't steal the key points of the exercises and the mental techniques, then I would say there would be no secrets in this world. A simple example, family, academy, sect competition, I just need to see your movements and I can tell you the skills and moves. Author, do you think this is reliable? At least change it, otherwise no one will teach you about this language problem and you will never learn it in your life -_-||After all, your character is a fool and cannot see your future.