Talking About the Three Kingdoms

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The content in it is really good, I like it, but the introduction of professions and characters at the beginning makes readers not in the mood to read it. I suggest you change it. I will give you two recommendation tickets tomorrow. I have spent them today. Come on.

The writing is very good. After reading three chapters, I found some unexpected magical changes. This book will become popular if you keep it up. Good luck, author.

I have a hunch that this book will become a hit as long as the police are not careful! The copywriting is also very well written, and the article goes directly to the main line without any extraneous content. I love it! Come on!

First of all, it can be seen that the setting is still relatively new. I have read the more famous book in this area, The Mythical Version of the Three Kingdoms. If it is well written, there is still room for improvement. Secondly, the author's writing level is also pretty good, which adds a lot to this book. I would like to make a suggestion. I hope the author can control the rhythm well. The current rhythm is not particularly smooth to read. The ups and downs in the front can be larger, or other methods can be used to attract readers. The word count is a bit short now, I hope the author will work hard to update it. If you keep at it, it won't be too much. The writing and plot are good, and you will eventually succeed. 🙂

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The author has great imagination and good writing skills. Come on

It's a very interesting story about the Three Kingdoms in Different Time and Space. Although there are a few words now, it's worth reading. Come on!

Immature suggestions are for reference only. The author does not need to write in the third person, he, he, he, he, he, he, he, he, he, can also use the name. He he's a show.

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Hahahahahahaha, the article is very interesting, but if you can add some vivid words, this should be an article that is eye-catching enough. Come on, author, you will get better and better.

Good! This book is worth pursuing! Come on and update!

It feels strange to read and confusing. The main line is not shown either. When writing about the Three Kingdoms, I either have to write it straight and straight, or I use system-style summoning, which is rather rubbish. If you want to write a historical novel in a more sophisticated way, add a touch of classical Chinese to the conversational tone. The opening chapter is like this on a certain month and a certain day in the seventh year of Chongzhen. Even if the background is different, it can still be written with emotion. The character switching is rather strange, and the inexplicable dividing lines look annoying. Pay attention to layout. The subject matter is relatively new, but the control is not interesting enough. There are very few themes about dressing up as Liu Bei. If you want to write it well, you must be able to read it well. You can follow the upgrading process, step by step, and use the unpredictable time travel to do business, earn money, recruit troops, and recruit talents. I can't really write about war, but it's also very irritating. Especially when fighting with Cao Cao and Sun Quan, I feel very happy just thinking about it. Furthermore, if you don't want to take risks yourself, you can find the boss as a counselor. But this is too little fun.

I was actually a little bit surprised when I read it, and it felt a little weird. I probably held this view: the novels that fictitate on the Three Kingdoms are all system-style and normal versions. I don't want to be the same as them, but I also have to consider whether the readers can accept it. It feels like the characters in the Three Kingdoms have super powers, which is really not a good match. There is a kind of Guan Yu suddenly appearing on the modern street. What do you think? It is indeed a good thing to find a new way and be original, but you really need to consider the audience.

There should be more ancient prose style, after all, you have to rely on history...

After all, it's history, isn't it a bit too white? The plot is quite satisfactory, I hope you can think more carefully about the sentences and play your cards well.

This... How should I put it? The writing is pretty good, but there are a lot of settings thrown in at the beginning. I guess most people can't remember that many, and the mystery of the characters is missing 😅 (@_@ Random comment)

The first few chapters are very interesting to read, keep up the good work.

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The setting is good, but the beginning is not exciting enough