Come to Their World

This novel is really good to read. Judging from the introduction of the characters related to the work, the layout is very large and attractive. I am looking forward to it.

I haven't dabbled in romance much, so I'd like to briefly express my opinion. Please forgive me if I offend you. 1. The writing is relatively smooth and the writing style is okay, but compared with similar works in romance, there is still a lot of room for improvement. 2. The story setting is quite stable, and I haven't seen any surprises so far. 3. The character design may be improved, as the female protagonist is well-known. The writer behaves a bit childishly, and the character is really not very likable 4. There are some bugs that are not expressed clearly. For example, when she first traveled through time, she wrote a lot of inner dramas about the heroine not knowing where she is, but there is no description of the scene. As an audience, I am more confused than the heroine 5. If the obvious problems are fixed, the overall performance is good, come on!

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The story is not bad. From the introduction, it seems that the framework of this article is quite large. I look forward to seeing the growth of the heroine. But the remarkable thing is that there are too many fast-traveling articles, and I need to write something more unconventional. I look forward to your wonderful stories later. Come on＾0＾~!

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