Five Years of Collapse, Three Years of Simulation

I beg you, author, please read the original plot! There are too many poisonous points, really too many. It's okay to watch without thinking. It's okay to watch without thinking. If you don't understand the plot of Honkai, it's okay. If you understand it, you can't stand it. I won't talk about the plot. The biggest use of the protagonist's system is the Quantum Sea. The most memorable thing in the lottery is the girly instant noodles. Traveling through the Quantum Sea many times has not made much progress in strength. The armor has only been upgraded a few times in two years. This cheating is really useless. It is the most rubbish system. And his strength is too low. I have seen more than 400 chapters. The red tassel gun and plasma shadow show he uses are his most damaging methods. He used to be a Beichen one-sword style, but now his sword skills have not been upgraded at all. His trump card is to store weapons in the warehouse and then release them by surprise. Is this the middle of the plot? Why are you so good at your strength? I've never seen cheating like this with more than 400 chapters, right? The ability you want most is Walter's favorability reward. Understanding recurrence, even if you get it, can you surpass the Herrscher of Reason? I've been waiting for you to upgrade the Red Tassel Gun for hundreds of chapters, but you're really not in a hurry. You know when Herrscher of the Sky will come out, so why don't you improve your strength earlier? I want to see the Herrscher of the Sky come out, and the male protagonist is trying to defeat the Herrscher of the Sky while being influenced. Your current timeline is in chaos, artificial stigmata have emerged from human experiments, the gray snakes are dead, and the Herrscher of the Sky has not come out. To escape, you actually let Kiana use the Herrscher of the Sky's ability. Isn't there no other way to let him use the Herrscher of the Sky's ability? Other people's novels are all about having no choice but to achieve certain goals or for some purpose. It's better for you. There are many ways to escape. You have to use the ability of the Herrscher of the Sky to forcefully awaken it. How can this be awakened by escape? This is what the author insists on awakening. If you are not strong enough, when the Herrscher of the Sky comes out, you will be one. I can't do anything? Let's not talk about strength, let's talk about Yuexiachuyou. In a time when the whole world is under surveillance, Theresa just waited for Yuexiachuyou to show up on her own initiative before she discovered it? And in front of Rita, don't you know what Theresa means to Otto? Now that it has been written that China is about to rise, what is the use of a Fu Xue who has just broken through S? Isn't it easy for Tianming to crush him to death? Why not send Yuexiachuxiong to China to hide until China has completely risen and then expose it? Just to make Rita feel cute? Theresa saw someone who looked exactly like her and didn't even ask. What a great guy. No one really cares about how the two armed dolls came about. I won't say that the ancient ruins of China are even more poisonous. The system has been upgraded so many times and it's still difficult to fight the emperor-level Honkaimon One of them, Bronya's birthday could have been a single chapter, and the time could be written in more detail from here, but it was taken from other plots. Just after the end, the good guy finished the first half of the page and the second half of the birthday was written. The time was vague. The first half of the page was about escaping and the second half was about eating hot pot. The next page was about a round with St. Freya, saying that Kiana has become fat. How long has it been since she became fat? Just one hot pot meal? You can definitely write about urban life, right? And I can't see what the male protagonist wants to do specifically. Is he going to protect his friends or fight against Honkai? You can't see his goal at all. You can write that he becomes stronger in order to protect his friends, fights for the beauty of the world, fights against Honkai, and fights for world peace. But I didn't see anything. What did I see? I only saw that the male protagonist wants to become stronger. What you want to express about the main plot is not clear at all. Are you asking me to guess? If you want to write well, you should first highlight the main line, right? For example, in the Arknights fanfic "Arknights is too real, isn't it", you can see what the male protagonist has to do every step of the way, and clearly see how he wants to do it, instead of the main plot being hazy Second, the concept of time needs to be written, right? We read fan fiction, so what are we reading? Isn't it the characters and plots in it? How can we read a book well if you can't keep track of time? Third, how to advance the plot? Advancing the plot is not based on your author's writing, but on the plot of the story. If you write that Fu Hua does not capture Kiana, and then the Herrscher of the Sky cannot come out, you can write that the male protagonist is involved in the Quantum Sea, missing for two months, and improves his strength in the Quantum Sea. Then Fu Hua had psychological fluctuations here, and finally caught Kiana, but when she became the Herrscher of the Sky, Himeko and Kiana were going to fight. You came out to stop Himeko, beat Kiana, and then use true feelings to make her feel. There are many ways Forget it, I'm too lazy to write, I'm sleepy

The author has also subscribed to all of them, so please add some details Even though I was a little anxious when I saw Youlandale, I still really like this cp.

Thunder Meiyi

I have been reading this book for a while, and I feel that the setting of the book is okay, at least I can keep reading, the characters are relatively full, the plot is also very attractive, and the author's attitude is also more serious. I once pointed out a few typos in the text, and they were corrected when I read it again. How to say, Beng San Tongren is quite niche, not many people read it, but it is not easy for the author to be able to update three times a day. Come on, I hope you stick to it and don't want to be a eunuch. Finally, let us shout loudly together: fight for all the good in the world!!!!

The writing style of this book is okay, at least not poisonous, and the character setting is quite fleshed out, but the naming standards are poor. . . I really don't dare to complain about this Bailian. . . After reading so many Honkai books, I feel that this one has a lot of potential. If I can catch the eye of an editor, I should be able to sign a contract. I'll give you a reward when the time comes, remember to add more... Also, can you not make Teacher Jizi's writing too tragic? The last lesson really made me burst into tears. . . Come on author, tickets are waiting for you!

Take off, night metaphysical card drawing. It's a pity that there is no Leilu

When Kiana's decisive battle with the Herrscher of a Thousand Faces came, Teacher Jizi appeared again. I couldn't control it, and an impolite word appeared in my mind, ah... Repeatedly pretending to be a corpse. 🐶

The Servant of Xinyan

Let's all level up. I'm level 75

Come on, author! Don't be a eunuch, I have subscribed to all the chapters now! Finally, I believe the author will be able to finish it!