Yunlan Disciple of Dou Po

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To be honest, there is no point in being patient like this. The Xiao family has the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Jade. The Ancient Clan and the Soul Palace will definitely take action. The blame for the destruction of the Xiao family must be on the Yunlan Sect. Secondly, Yunshan is connected with Jiu Dharma Protector and bears the mark of the Soul Palace. It is naturally hostile to the Ancient Clan and Xiao Yan.

By the way, I remembered something, why didn't you tell the people in the Soul Palace that Xiaoyan had an extremely powerful soul body (Yaochen soul)? If the Soul Palace found someone who had been to Yunshan, they could report it to the Soul Palace. Even if the Soul Palace doubts it, it can be overcome. Without Golden Finger, Xiaoyan would be useless. With his character, he would not be able to survive. There is no need to be afraid of Xun'er's revenge. After all, the ancient clan would not send out at least five-star Douzong or above people to destroy a sect just for a trash.

Well written, go for it and beat Xiao Yan🤓🤓

Looking at the updated chapters so far, I have simply summarized three lines to express my sense of existence. 🤓 If there is something wrong or something you don't like, feel free to say it, just treat it as communication~ ●Furukawa, Yun Yun and Yun Bing's love triangle Furukawa will definitely not be able to make love with Yun Yun, and Furukawa cannot be said to be a black man. He can only be said to be unwilling, but in essence he is still a good man in love, but because he is a pharmacist In the end, he couldn't be a bitch even though he knew it wouldn't work. In the end, the relationship with him may have become less and less. It was heartbreaking at the beginning, but if things go well later, he might become friends. After all, the protagonist is not the kind of person who would step on everyone he meets, and Yun Bing and Furukawa both tend to have peaceful personalities, so it should be impossible for them to fight. Furthermore, Yun Bing is described as a piece of wood, so a fight is unlikely at the moment. But it was difficult for Yun Yun to say it. He knew that Yan Ran had not spoken out, so he might have to take advantage of her. Yun Yun: Apprentice, don't blame the master for not being human, it's your uncle who is too tempting~😁 ●Xiao Mei, Yun Bing and Xiao Yan There is a saying, Yun Bing is really suspected of being a scumbag. (My mind: be bold, remove the "somewhat" and "suspect", he is a scumbag!) Judging from the current situation, Xiao Mei has embarked on a road of no return since being "seduced" by Yun Bing. They will definitely meet again later, but maybe they will see more powerful female characters around Yun Bing (Yun Yun, Nalan Yanran) and feel ashamed, so she will work harder to prove herself. Or the heartbreak leads to a tragic story line (normal people should not do this, except for dog licking). As for Xiao Yan... He is a complete scumbag. He has incorrect views and bad conduct. He also likes to say some heroic words to "deceive" himself and think that he is a good person. The story development between him and the protagonist should happen in the collision, but there should be less encounters after that. Before the encounter, this "collision" needs to occur in the form of a collision between a supporting character related to Yun Bing and Xiao Yan, such as Xiao Mei. The final ending, the tone of this book has already emerged, that is, Xiao Yan did not repent in the collisions again and again, and finally broke his scalp, or repented, put on a red scarf from then on, and became a qualified three-good student. ●Yun Bing and the old sect leader (it seems to be called Yunshan, I always can't remember his name, and I always get confused with the elder's name) and Yun Yun The three masters and apprentices will be miserable. Finally, my personal guess is that in order for the protagonist and the Soul Palace (soul clan) to go against each other, the old sect master must have sacrificed something, so that the general direction of the novel will come out. As for Yun Yun, to be honest, I really don't want her to be defiled like in the original work and wait for her, and finally get her heart broken by the heartless man, and wander away alone. So I still agree that the protagonist and Yun Yun are good. They are close in age, can take care of others, are gentle and mature. It's much better than Yanran (of course I'm just making a simple comparison, Yanran is also better than Yanran, after all, both of them are my wives 😌) ■That's it, I can't think of anything else for a while. As a loyal reader, how can I not brush up my presence? 😁Hehe~

I haven't watched it yet, but after reading the introduction, I can't help but want to spray it 😂😂😂

I've invested in a few of them after looking at them, and I think they're okay. But the part about breaking off the engagement was really frustrating. What I think is that you can pretend to let Nalan Yanran win over Xiaoyan at the beginning and then trick him into your home and kill him 🤓 or you can just marry him yourself and say that you want to take him into your home and become your uncle. But now the done deal is, this is about the so-called 70 paragraphs. Actually, many systems in fantasy novels like this cannot help but be studied carefully. Even if you mess around with its system, you will find that it cannot justify itself. So writing fan fiction is quite hard, you have to fix the loopholes. After all, I am also writing a fan My idea of ​​the so-called seventy-level fighting spirit is very simple In the original work, it is said that fighting spirit is transformed by absorbing the energy of heaven and earth. Then the energy is condensed into a cyclone in the body. In other words, before becoming a fighter, this energy was flowing in the body, or stored. He does not form a self-flowing cycle. This is the fundamental difference between fighters and those who practice fighting spirit. After your energy forms an effective cycle, its utilization rate and destructive power will be doubled The protagonist's 70-level Dou Qi cannot form a cyclone, but it is hoarding a large amount of energy. And I think the difference between the two is not very big. Why? For example, if you say that Chen Douqi Cyclone then made ordinary steel into a structure to enhance his ability to resist strikes and use a special structure. The protagonist is built up with a lot of steel. Which one is better between the two, I prefer the protagonist. You can even take a completely different path from the original Dou Po. The physical body is semi-energized. Wait for a series of cool operations. Well, some of my assumptions may be contrary to the original work. Setting, because I haven't read this book in a long time, this is what I have read before. But I think if the fan fiction doesn't add a second setting and doesn't change the plot, then I might as well read the original work Let me digress a little bit, does the author have a group? I want to join the group and steal your outline. 🤓 I did write a few some time ago. Fans of Doupo also had this idea, and I wrote a few more. However, I started in Mocheng, but then I put it down because I was still in school and was busy with exams. I picked it up after the holiday, but suddenly I found that my inspiration was gone, so I stopped writing. Now I am writing a Douluo fanfic. After I finish writing this, I plan to start writing the previous one (don't worry, I didn't publish my copy. I just selected a few pictures.) And in the process of writing fan fiction, I also became deeply aware of it. It's so easy to write a fan, but I don't have the time to fix the loopholes and verify the original work, so I might as well write an original one. Come on author Thanks for the above

Author, won't you update this afternoon? Actually I have a question. Do authors like you have a job during the day? Or is it a career? (Let me tell you quietly that I have discovered the secret of his slow updating. He just types slowly. He should pay attention to his health at night. 😊😊😊😊)

After reading more than 30 chapters, I want to express my opinions. First of all, I like the plot of this book very much. After reading the book review section, I think everyone will be happy with the final result. But to be honest, the author's writing style is really discouraging. After reading more than 30 chapters, I had the idea of ​​abandoning the book at least four times. Although the author said that the rest of the book will be exciting, I have to get through the front first. Sorry, I can't get through it. This only represents my personal opinion. I hope readers will not be biased against the book because of my opinion. Before I leave, I will give this book a small thumbs up. I hope the author can continue writing, come on!

It's dark and well-founded, don't look at this book with the eyes of a primary school student Those who like Dou Po Cang Qiong, please read Dou Po Cang Qiong again and use your brain to think about Xiao Yan's character. Not talking about molesting Xiao Xun'er when he was a child, and I don't know why Xiao Xun'er forcibly likes anti-inflammatory drugs, let's just talk about the break-up of the engagement Watch the scene of the break-up of the engagement, watch it more, think about it more, and you will find out. Xiao Yan actually didn't care about breaking off the engagement, he just wanted to show off through talk.

I really like this book. As long as the author writes "Farewell the Eunuch", I will vote for it and order it all after it is released. I really like "Farewell the Eunuch".

Helpless The protagonist of the original work was badly written. I remember that the protagonist of the original work has been frustrated for many years and has understood the warmth and warmth of the world. How did the author write it like this? Is it to set off the pig's feet in this book? What aura of wisdom does the protagonist bring? Directly subvert the original pig's feet?

This second chapter is so disgusting. If you want to push Yanran to Xiao Yan, push it quickly. If you don't push it, go and propose the marriage. You still act like it's for the sake of the sect and Yanran. It's disgusting. If you are afraid that he will become powerful, just kill him. The worst is that he will be killed by Xiao Xun'er. He always goes to embarrass Yanran and acts like he is doing it for your good. In the end, he is not afraid of death.

It's purely a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. I feel that Yun Yun's matter has not been resolved, because Yun Yun still has this bet in her heart, and Furukawa is still thinking about how to be a good brother-in-law In fact, the handling of the plot after waking up feels quite unnecessary. From a pure reader's perspective, the protagonist can wake up with or without Furukawa. The protagonist still doesn't know that Furukawa forced Yun Yun to marry him a year later, and gave Furukawa benefits. He also wants to be the protagonist's brother-in-law, which kind of takes advantage of the protagonist. I feel quite uncomfortable. In fact, I feel that this matter should be resolved as soon as possible, and then use the elixir to completely solve the matter. The protagonist Yun Yun has a heart-to-heart talk, forming a wave of pleasant points that are first suppressed and then suppressed, instead of dragging it out. Continuing this poisonous point makes the reader feel like there is a thorn in the heart. Anyway, I am not in the mood to watch the next plot. It depends on when this matter will be resolved. Hey, give the author two recommendation votes to write and solve this matter as soon as possible.

Since you have decided to become Xiao Yan's enemy, let's steal his opportunity and his wife. Can the protagonist stop being cowardly? So what if the future is related to Xiao Yan? Then can't you just contact me first? What are you afraid of!

Judging from the author's description of the protagonist's temperament, I feel that practicing fire attribute skills is weird, and I feel that the wind attribute is more suitable. I don't know how the author will arrange the attributes of the protagonist. I will analyze it, Yunlan Sect is famous for its swordsmanship, and the protagonist must have practiced it if he has such a high understanding. The sword is very powerful. With so many levels of fighting spirit, I guess the amount of fighting spirit will be much greater than that of warriors of the same level in the future. The ability to continue fighting is very strong. Moreover, the protagonist does not have Burning Jue, so there is no way to use the Buddha's Angry Fire Lotus like the protagonist. He cannot overwhelm people with force, so in a fight, he can only fight with understanding and dexterity.

By the way, will Tudou sue this book? 😥 It would be a pity to sue (´;;`)

I don't think it's necessary to grab Xiao Yan's ring. Yao Chen doesn't have much effect on the protagonist. It always feels awkward to have an old man next to you all the time.

Authors, don't listen to other people's nonsense. If you are a new author, it is best not to do anything original. It will be embarrassing if you don't control it well. Let's practice writing a fanfic first.

Author, I feel that what you wrote before is not too broken, but I didn't expect that it started to break down step by step after the protagonist left the sect. Why does Doupo have to be related to the Little Medical Fairy, and why must he be related to Xiao Xun'er? We are not here to see you having an affair with the heroine or the supporting actress. If you write like this, everyone says it is poisonous, so you have to have a relationship with all the characters in the original text?

😒 It's normal for Pig's Foot to be beaten to death by Xiaoyan, and the Yunluan Sect was slaughtered. Is it normal for Pig's Foot to travel through time with the earth's brains? Is it disabled? The world-destroying boss of the Soul Clan, Pig's Foot, naively places its hope on Xiaoyan and expects him to defeat the final boss. Since this is the correct approach, shouldn't it be transformed into the ultimate licking dog to lick Anti-Inflammation and spoil everything in advance to protect Anti-Inflammation's upgrade?

It's really very good-looking, and there's nothing sinister about it. I hope the author doesn't create a harem or anything like that, and it's better to create an original female protagonist.

To be honest, I'm quite disappointed I can't stop updating at all times The quality has begun to decline I really don't know Does the author really live up to the expectations of us readers

Isn't this just asking Yun Bing to go through Xiao Yan's plot? No innovation at all.

The flaws in the early stage are probably anti-inflammatory, but in the later stages, you will find that the protagonist's character gradually emerges, and the plot is handled very well. You can invest in reading. (Suggestion: Let anti-inflammatory grow and slowly abuse 🤓🤓🤓) Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง (Vote for you.)

If they had just met and said that they were also time-travelers, they would basically not have fought each other.

I don't need to look at it to know that it's rubbish, and it's definitely anti-inflammatory. I shouldn't go to Yunlan, I shouldn't take revenge on Nalan, I shouldn't disband Yunlan, and the Xiao family should be exterminated by the Yunlan Sect, right? Shouldn't Anti-Inflammation be insulted by Nalan? Is breaking off the engagement to pursue freedom? The Xiao family should be insulted for co-authoring it, right?

It's too bloody, pretending to be innocent while running a harem, being merciless and ambiguous everywhere, I know you want to show that the protagonist is awesome, but don't turn Xiao Yanyao into a mentally retarded person.

I'm here to recommend a book and fight against Xiao Yan's fellow Dou Po fans. I have a plug-in for Dou Po. It's a pig's trotter. The plot is reasonable and it won't be a mindless fight from the beginning.

I saw more than 30 photos and couldn't hold it any longer. Goodbye.