Whose Poems and Distance

I read a little bit, sorry, this is my humble opinion If this is prose, it is very beautiful and artistic, but if it is a novel, you should pay attention to the fact that shaping the plot is very important, and this book is more scattered. Pay attention to shaping some wonderful plots, and read more works of other great masters, and you will definitely make progress! Also, if you choose a good name, you can make up your own name. Don't use ABCD instead of place names. As long as the readers have a sense of involvement, you will succeed. Come on! 🌹

Personally I feel pretty good. It does not follow the routine template, so the plot is slightly weak, but the writing is surprisingly good. After reviewing so many books, many authors think that the so-called writing style is just a pile of words or detailed, but in fact it is just confusing to read. Now that I have finally read an article whose writing style is really good, I am inexplicably moved. In other respects, I hardly read female videos, so I won't criticize them. The author keeps up the good work and wishes you early success.

That's outrageous. I can't see it when posting on a small account. My creative hero is useless.

First of all, I may stop updating in the future, maybe for a long time, so you don't need to invest in Beiwei. Beiwei doesn't dare to think about signing a contract or anything! Secondly, Beiwei swears here that no matter how fierce the wording of your book review is [Welcome to write book reviews! ], As long as it makes sense, at least you can explain it yourself, Beiwei will never delete it! Even Beiwei can add more content if it feels reasonable!

I want to report you for opening a small account to get likes, why? Why do you want to give me likes 😭😭 on every account? I got a total of five likes! ! !

I don't know when my memory became bad, so I'm sorry that I have forgotten when I met Qiuzi. When I first saw this name (Whose Poetry and Distance), I remembered that "Life is not just about the present, but also poetry and distance." It should be a very popular sentence a few years ago. At that time, I I was just thinking, does this name represent the poetry and distance that an ignorant girl 😜 cannot reach in her heart? Please forgive me for using the word ignorance first. Maybe it's because I am a realist. My point of view is that there are many things in life that we cannot deal with emotionally or rationally. The shackles of getting rid of - studies, family, life, many comparisons between peers..., And most of us will be trapped in it throughout our lives. Firewood, rice, oil, salt, soy sauce, vinegar and tea are the main theme of our lives. Poetry and distant places are beautiful and worthy of our lifelong pursuit, so I think it is an ideal. The ideal originates from reality but is higher than reality. Chasing ideals is to a large extent equivalent to giving up reality, or giving up what you are doing now. So my first reaction was that of an ignorant girl. Then I thought about it, isn't this a different kind of poetry and distance? Putting the poems and distant places in your heart on paper is not only a kind of enjoyment, but also a kind of wisdom. At this point, my thoughts have been exhausted for the time being. I will continue writing next time if I have ideas. Thank you for watching.

Suddenly I discovered that I actually have 250 contribution points 🙂🙂🙂 If I continue like this, I can have my own alt account and be the operations officer for myself... Ah, no, no, it sounds weird😂😂

I regret it. I want to continue to update. I can't listen to the class anyway, so just like this, I will listen to the Buddhist class and update the Buddhist class. At least... My heart will not be so empty. Beiwei loves you! (*￣3￣)╭♡

The style of the whole story is very gentle, and has its own characteristics in this era of fragmented reading. The concept and structure of the whole article are great. I like the setting of the story about drinking in the Wangyou Tavern, but the plot and characters are not very full, and it feels distant from the readers. Then I got a little confused while watching it, so I went back and watched it again hahaha 😁

Come and see my beautiful, generous, gentle and pleasant operating officer late at night!

Why hasn't it been updated yet😭

I come to visit you late at night and see you grinding your teeth and snoring.

The style is very good. Reading this book feels like someone is narrating it. Actually, at first I felt that the first two chapters were a bit discouraging. On the one hand, the narrative is quite bland. The most important thing is that there is no conflict at the beginning like the golden three chapters of other novels to attract readers to continue reading. However, as long as you read slowly, you will find that this dull narrative is also an attractive writing style. The transitions can be described in more detail, and the character's own words should be considered more carefully if they are consistent with his or her personality. This will allow readers to feel more deeply about the characters in the book, and won't the number of words go up as well (manually ignore this item). It can be seen that I have read a lot of novels, but I don't feel very comfortable writing novels. I would like to suggest that you think more before writing. Maybe you can read it a few more times before revising it. These are all personal suggestions. The most important thing is to please yourself ~ don't forcefully change your style.

I read this book carefully from beginning to end today, and I feel so ashamed that I... Wrote such a thing 😆

We're still just a little bit away, and Bei Wei's book has 100 recommendation votes. I'm so happy! (*˘˘*). .:*♡ I don't know which cutie it will be, and I don't know... Will it be today... Forget it, anyway, Beiwei has to wait for the 100th cutie to vote, and then... It seems there's nothing she can do Õ_Õ But Beiwei just has to wait! Wait from today!❤❤ This is really a sad story😂😂

I think the person above said it very well. It feels like a very good prose book. It is not an online novel that can be read at a glance, but a book that needs to be read carefully. What I actually want to say is, don't be scared by the data. This book may not be suitable for the online literature market, but I believe it will be a good book. Then, I also wrote novels when I was in high school. I used notebooks and wrote seven or eight books, which must have hundreds of thousands of words. My favorite thing is to write essays, because I have many good sentences that can be included in essays. Later, in the college entrance examination, I scored 50 points higher than the first-tier score. As others said, writing novels did not affect my score (maybe if I didn't write, I would have scored a hundred points higher). I can only say that it depends on the individual's allocation of time and energy. After all, studying is also a student's duty. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and complete a novel that will satisfy you.

Sign in, punch in, what kind of card? Little ball card, little ball, where can you escape? Xiao Qinger, where are you? Go ahead and delete the post and let me post it. (Little Qiu'er, put it on top, I'm afraid Xiao Qing'er can't see it.) 🤩

Borrowing from today's post, ball, take care of yourself! There is no need to tire your body out for our updates! Real! It's been many days since the last update, and you haven't even dragged the production team's mules along! Hurry up and update!

The lady's writing is very good. Everyone is welcome to collect and recommend it, and support genuine reading! 😎😎😎

Lin buried the prince's tears, and Weiwei's smile captivated the city. It's a pity that now I'm so fat that I look like a meat dumpling.

Ding, let me comment for you! I have to say that the writing style is really good! It's very artistic, but still energetic, great! However, I feel that the plot is not very interesting, and it is easy for people to abandon the story midway. Come on!

{"NickName":"Bi Wei Qiuzi","UserId":343935011} came out and got beaten

As the title says, this is a post to denounce a certain person who has a loud voice because she didn't brush her teeth. Why is she so loud? Because she actually underestimated our anti-ball power, and said that no one responded to me, and even if I start a new book, I won't finish the old one. As a determined old man, I The book party can't stand it anymore, so I posted this post to denounce a certain ball. Let us combine our anti-ball forces and defeat the hateful ball together. Princes, generals, and ministers would rather be kind 😡😡

①Don't read the cover⚠ ②Don't read the content⚠ ③Don't click it⚠ Thanks to my family🙏 This is an article I wrote two years ago when I was seriously ill with secondary school syndrome. The content should be as low as possible. I am thin-skinned and I really can't afford to embarrass others (ಥಥ)

Humble, please walk slower😭😭😭

The words and sentences are carefully chosen. I felt ashamed after looking at it.

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Good morning, the new year has begun

It's been a while since I've been to see giegie.

No, what's going on with this book? What's going on? So many people responded. It's just over 1,000 words.