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The writing can still be improved, it's a bit stiff now

(I agreed to review the book before. I'm sorry for not being able to review the masterpiece as soon as possible. I hope you'll forgive me.) To be honest, I don't know much about the workplace. But the whole article is very smooth and a very good story. I also like this story very much. What needs to be improved is as a book friend said, pay attention to the language problem at work. Your aviation does not work with other jobs, and there are many things to avoid. Overall very good.

Don't give up just because the background introduced in the early stages of this book seems a little vague. The back and front parts feel like they were written by two people (funny) But after more than ten chapters, conflicts began to break out The plot began to focus It felt like there were descriptions of business, military and other aspects, and it was a huge highlight when it was written well The main highlight is that the protagonist is a person who betrayed his class. The main thread of the book should be struggle. It may be a little vague in some places, but most of the plots are very reasonable and quite attractive.

The author could use more descriptions of facial expressions. Everything else is pretty good. Come on.

Author, I read what you wrote. I think it's time for you to get signed.

To be honest, I was a bit confused. I hope it can be explained when there are professional terms, otherwise it will be easy to dissuade~ It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing in large letters, but there are no conflicts in the early plot, and such professional terms are a little dissatisfied, but overall it is still worth watching. I'll go to Baidu first to find out what the book means...

The characters in the author's works are so handsome and elegant You will know that the author is a handsome guy Come on, support you (ง•̀_•́)ง

The content of the book is still very exciting. Some of the daily routines in the aviation industry are well explained in detail. I hope the author can perform better.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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Due to my busy schedule recently, I would like to ask for a day off from work.

Today I have a feeling It's time for spring to return to the earth. Let's look forward to the day of Zhang Jun's triumphant return!

Come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The big letters give a strong sense of immersion, and the plot is interesting. Come on! As a student party, I would like to encourage you!

It's really well written, come on

I don't know much about workplace books, but the clever layout in the article makes me feel immersed in it. The complicated relationship between the characters makes me want to read more. The writing is also good and easy to understand. I will save it and read it!

It can be seen that the author wrote the story carefully. Come on! ! !

The author writes in great detail, and the plot is very compact and interesting. Come on! ! !

Dear friends, we have decided to stop updating the main text snippets this week. Because I think the creative intention needs to be known to everyone and is more important, so I am publishing the author's explanation chapter. I hope that if you have any questions, you can ask me. Thank you very much.

It feels like it is written in a big way, with the feeling of starting from a refreshing novel and some war-themed novels. Some parts are very particular, and some parts are still not handled enough. Maybe it's because I am a bit obsessed with details. Come on hehehe

I'm here. Received

Your writing is good, your language is concise and fluent, and your descriptions of characters and scenes are vivid and detailed. I have to learn more from you, and I feel that your knowledge is very broad, especially aviation, which I don't know much about. 😁 I have a small comment, but after reading it, I feel that the beginning is a bit bland. It would be better if you add some exciting short paragraphs to attract people. Overall, it is very good. I can learn more from you 🙏🙏

Thank you to the author for your comments and collections. I will also reply~ To be honest, I have basically never read this kind of article, but for some reason I felt very comfortable when I read this article today. Maybe it is because of my skillful writing style and ability to describe details! The characters are brought to life and the storyline is fascinating. However, the only drawback is the punctuation and typos... Maybe it is in comparison with the article. I hope the author will keep up the good work! 🌹🌹🌹

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To be honest, I rarely read this type of article. The knowledge covered in the article is quite broad. It can be seen that the author is very powerful. Whether it is the story or the description of the characters and scenes, it is completely ok. I don't know much about aviation, and I don't understand all the technical terms in this area (my fault). There are many places that could be more detailed. At the beginning, there are too many characters at once, so I suggest you slowly integrate them so that readers can accept and remember them. Overall worth reading. (The above is entirely from the personal advice of a scumbag, please do not spray)

The writing is clean and refreshing, the characters are rich, and it is comfortable to read. It is a good and readable article. The beginning can be more exciting. You can try to design a scene that is highly dramatic, performative, and graphic, which will make the substitution much stronger. Wish Da Da a successful creation!

Hmm... I suggest you revise the punctuation, it's used very strangely in many places. The story is undoubtedly a good one, but the style is not as strong as other genres. Please keep writing more.

It is recommended that the author establish the characters in some places, with distinct personalities, and do not distinguish them only by names. It is best to use typical examples that can be thought of when seeing people, and guess how the characters will respond in the current situation (but the characters must not collapse)

Small trip, personal opinion. Generally, at the beginning of a novel, the author focuses on the reader's interest first and often starts with an exciting story or other novel opening. My article is bland at the beginning, and few people read it, but I don't rule out readers who read the introduction and insist on reading 😁 At the airport, I can see your detailed writing from the beginning, (haha, to be honest, I have never flown on an airplane because I find it too troublesome.) However, this kind of article is quite rare, and their stories are worth telling. Little Brigade is good at portraying the characters, the scenes are also graphic, and the writing is good. Come on⊙▽⊙

Big, I commented back and forth. I read chapter twenty. Have a desire to pursue reading. Maybe I usually read more history, science fiction, and western fantasy. Lack of some sensitivity and understanding of reality makes it difficult to raise some improvement issues on the article itself. I also have some feelings about what I wrote recently. Let me share my recent insights. Writing a book comes from interest and from the starting point you want. But when I actually started writing, it turned into wanting to be recognized by others. Getting recognition at the starting point is only one way, writing commercial novels. The biggest feature of commercial novels is that you can't stop having fun. Two chapters are a little fun, and four chapters are a big hit. It can be a foreshadowing, but I want to have some fun in the foreshadowing. I also lacked understanding of this in the early stage, so I understood why the editor did not sign me. But I personally don't like the obvious slap in the face from ancient times, so it's a bit difficult to write about the feeling of pleasure, but I'm working hard in that direction. Brother's article is like a TV series, some chapters are also refreshing, but the feeling is not that strong. I usually read novels and I don't feel so relaxed when reading. My personal opinion is that I just jumped on the street, brother, just take a look. After all, perception may be blind perception. Finally, I wish my brother to get up early and sign the contract.