Xi Yance

There is a kind of rush that lures the enemy deeper. We are the enemy, related to what happened to her, and we follow her rhythm step by step, step by step, from a simple family gathering to the uncertainties of the world when we grow up. Growth requires a price. Fortunately, everything is pretty good.

Where can I ask the question? I want to hear the author sing loudly

The introduction is a bit hard to read, and there are typos, please help. Then this book is great, the story is very good, the content and plot are very attractive, but the plot is a little slow. Of course, it is not a big problem. It depends on what you think about it. Finally, please give me some feedback. I comment seriously, and the tickets have been used up today. If you have any extra tomorrow, I will give it to you. Keep up the good work! Hey-hey

Collected it first, it's still good, please keep updating

Hmm... Judging from the current word count, the plot is very attractive The writing is good The dialogue between the characters is also very natural and smooth The introduction is a bit confusing and a bit confusing at first glance Suggested modifications Others are acceptable

The author's character descriptions are quite good. The story is also quite innovative. It is not an old-fashioned rich family story, or an ancient rebirth story, but a story about a lost brother looking for his younger brother. Very interesting. Come on! ! !

The writing is good, I have collected it and will read it slowly. Come on! Welcome to return

Tomorrow, I'll give you the female channel tickets. I originally had two more, but then I didn't know what to do. Sorry

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The article looks quite comfortable, and several descriptions are almost astonishing to me. It has the writing style of a master. Keep up the good work.

Come on, come on, the mighty little peasant girl will work hard with you.

I came here from the drug test post. First of all, the writing is very good, including the punctuation marks that can be carried behind different words. The antique atmosphere makes people excited as the storyline develops, and has a strong sense of immersion.