From Feizhai to Shenhao

Don't you want the car? What's the point of letting Tang Tian go all the time? As the saying goes, cars and women can't be loaned out. Also, there is nothing like what a divine being should look like.

I read a chapter and found two words too long.

The author really wants to write that the male protagonist can be a little tougher 😒. I'm still tired of reading novels about gods and heroes. Let's not say that I am the only one in Bahuang Liuhe~ but be more heroic! Don't be a big brother who worries about gains and losses when women don't reply to messages. What you write is a heroic novel, not an urban romance. The main subject of your book is male! Hey!

The powerful heroine of the novel is gone!

Once the national martial arts is mastered, ancient martial arts and cultivation will not be far away...

I write this paragraph first of all to thank all the readers who have read my book. Writing a book for the first time, there must be many shortcomings! I hope you will bear with me! Thank you for your recommendation votes and favorites! Thank you also to those readers who read the book and left me comments! Of course some people are willing to read my books, and some people don't like my books. This is normal. Watching collections sometimes go up and down again, it's quite psychologically unpleasant. However, it is still gradually increasing, which is a bit comforting. It's hard to reconcile everyone's opinions. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. As for the protagonist's character setting, I think a person needs to grow. The psychology of an eighteen-year-old is definitely different from that of a twenty-eight-year-old. Just because you have experienced something doesn't mean others have experienced it too. Change occurs only after you have experienced it. No one can change from who they are now to a completely different person. Anyway, I don't believe it. I'm talking about becoming a different person right away. Remember what it was like when you first met someone you liked? Have you ever been nervous? Ha ha! Strive to keep two updates every day. This is my first time writing a novel, and it's a bit toxic! I want to hold on as long as I can. And I have saved a manuscript! Haha, did you expose something? 🤭 One more sentence! Please invest, recommend, and collect! 🌹🌹🌹

Your sister looked at me and wanted to hit Yang Hui. The line about Tai Chi goddess Yang Hui is really irritating. And you said that Shenhao, where are the questions? Isn't it good to grow slowly? You have to make a story about Tai Chi girls coming out of Tai Chi. Why is it that grandpa said that a very powerful young Tai Chi successor is her husband?

The biggest failure of the whole book is to show off the martial arts. You could just improve the physical fitness of the male protagonist. It makes him look like the King of Soldiers from Huadu more than ten years ago. He even did a Tai Chi pose before a fight. It's so embarrassing.

I quit, and after reading a few chapters, I couldn't stop chatting with the system. I had money and didn't know how to spend it, so I just recharged the game. The protagonist's IQ is not online, so let's look at the clues.

The plot Yang Hui enters is too stiff... I don't like this forced feeling, no matter how beautiful she is, I don't like it.

What the author wrote is pretty good, but I suggest that things like martial arts should be gradually downplayed. They are clichéd and redundant. If you are just hanging on the wall, what kind of martial arts do you need? Wouldn't it be nice to become Superman? The male protagonist also has a strong tendency to lick dogs. I hope the author pays attention to it. Come on!

Come on, come on, everyone, take a look, this is a solo heroine, please go everywhere to reward the solo heroine and subscribe. If you want to improve your results, there will be more solo goddesses.

Wonderful literary heroine, this book is a must-have 🔥

There are three golden chapters. I persisted for 2 of them. I couldn't stand the third chapter and died from the poison.

What I hate the most is the greasy ruthlessness of fat men chasing beautiful women.

A lot of dialogue with the system, don't do this with hydrology too

I don't like fat houses, no special circumstances, I even dislike fat houses.

The title of this book made me laugh, and I really wanted to change it to "From Fat House to Happy Ball" 🤓🤓

There is a great novel here with a single female protagonist♀ People who are asking the author to write a single female protagonist come and subscribe and give rewards. Use your money to vote so that the author will continue to write a single female protagonist.

Because suddenly a girl from Tai Chi followed the protagonist shamelessly, and the protagonist looked like a coward. She lived in your house and spent your money. She didn't have any skills yet, but she still licked her. It really made me want to vomit. Poisonous weeds can poison people. Your writing is not bad. Why do you have to disgust people? After all, you are also a great writer, but you have to be a licking dog.