The Fantasy of Holographic Online Games

I just started reading the article. At first glance, the writing is smooth, the goal of the online game is clear, and the writing is not sloppy. I hope I can keep it. I will save it and read it later.

Already finished reading. I rarely read game articles, so I'll just briefly talk about my feelings. The writing style is smooth, the world view and background are clearly explained, and the switching between reality and game has no sense of inconsistency. It allows readers to understand the direction of the plot. I believe there are many readers who like this genre. One more little suggestion. It's just the introduction and beginning, which may not be very attractive. Should I change them as appropriate? (As an introductory person, this also makes me very distressed hahaha) Finally, cheers.

The book is okay, invest first~

The plot is online, the writing is smooth, and the writing is excellent. In particular, the large-scale holographic online games are very enjoyable, and the transition between them and real society is also good. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I have collected a lot of works and encourage each other.

I rarely read online game articles, but I think DaDa's writing is very exciting. I really like DaDa's books. Come on, DaDa, you have to work hard on coding ヽ(•̀ω•́ )ゝ

Male and female protagonists - I suspect Yinhe Luojiutian should be the male protagonist, right? The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very evocative. It feels like a circle. The male protagonist sacrifices his life to save the female protagonist once, and the female protagonist also saves him without knowing it. Although Qianmei is Yinjue's sister and the complicated relationship between the northern and southern families is a bit confusing, it is still very good! It's a pity that it's a bit short, and there's only one world. It would be nice if I could write more, it feels a bit unfinished.

Recently I am reading an online game article "The Fantasy of Holographic Online Games". It should be that the heroine enters the illusion of the holographic game in March. Regarding an upcoming catastrophe, the ten major families and the ten destined people, the grand picture slowly unfolds... While she is enjoying the game, the past events surface and the hidden secrets are gradually revealed. ... Generally speaking, I feel that the author is experienced in writing, just like the game routines I have played before. The whole plot has a strong visual sense. It should be fully unfolded now. In March, from the rebirth of the Destiny Man Duhu praying for tears to Beichen Qian sleep, I feel that Dongfeng Conservation is also like a reborn person. I look forward to solving many questions one by one later. It's just that it's so hard to follow the article. I have to wait every day and it's gone after reading only two paragraphs. The author has a good writing foundation. The whole text is smooth and fluent. I haven't found a single typo so far. It's really not easy! I hope that I can maintain my current writing skills, persist in finishing my writing, and don't let it get into trouble! When I was reading a book, I accidentally saw the "Listen to a book" button and tried listening to a book. The effect was not bad. It should not be too satisfying for someone like me who overuses computers at work and games after get off work. What I particularly appreciate is that you can also choose the reading style and speaking speed. There are six reading styles: "Emotional Man", "Martial Arts Man", "Soft Cute Girl", "Loli Girl", "Young Girl" and "Intellectual Girl". Give Qidian a big thumbs up! The only drawback is that it can be accessed from anywhere. Currently, I have found an entrance for listening to books. Taking "The Fantasy of Holographic Online Games" as an example, I would like to share it with you: On the home page of Qidian, click the second "Selected" button at the bottom of the phone screen, and click the first "Selected" button in the menu that appears in the upper middle. "Category" button, select "Girls" - "Game Competition" in the menu that appears, classify in the lower left corner, click "Holographic Online Game Fantasy" in the new book selection, enter the leftmost button at the bottom of the mobile phone screen is "Listen to books", click in to start listening to books.