Spirit Pet Ninety-Nine

The author who bound the wrong mobile phone account needs everyone's opinions. My book friend circle is really cold and lonely...

Today, the first spiritual pet of Bai Qiguan, the weapon spirit-the spirit of white paper-Miss Origami, appears! If you have any good ideas, you can also share them in the book club.

Someone actually voted for recommendation last night! As the author incarnate, I am extremely grateful 🙏 If someone likes reading this book, the author and I are very satisfied!

I have read the first dozen chapters. Overall, I like this story very much. Maybe it is not that fast-paced, but all the foreshadowing and narration make people feel very comfortable. So far, there doesn't seem to be any particularly fierce conflicts, but of course the most exciting things have to be left behind. Just like Mr. Ma Sanli's cross talk "Secret Recipe", all the previous ones are relatively dull and not exciting enough at the moment, but the last sentence "Tickle!" Is enough to make everyone laugh. If all the exciting points are used in the front, the later part will appear dull. I also like the author's writing, which is full of a very natural sense of humor. Sometimes there is some small black humor, which makes people feel relaxed when reading it, and makes them smile knowingly when they feel something. The couple Bai Letian and Shangguan Xiaoxing always feel like Kudo Yusaku and Yukiko, very loving and very happy. I also like the setting of Zhi Ling very much, it feels like a child who is a bit arrogant and a bit timid. Very endearing. In a word, keep writing and don't forget your original intention. I think this will be a very good story!

After reading it, I don't know what to say, but I still have to give some advice, that is, the entire novel has no goal. At least I didn't see any important goal. After all, I just read it casually. Becoming stronger is the goal of all novels and cannot be counted. It seems a bit long-winded. Personal opinion, I don't like to spray by mistake.