Fat Man Desert Island Series

I'm still supporting the ones I like, or I'm abandoning the books because I didn't write them well! Thank you all! It makes me feel that I am not playing single-player 😢 for the first time, and there are shortcomings! Dear friends, please give me your comments and suggestions! Thanks again

A good subject matter, it has a more realistic feel than those system survival articles.

Let's change it to third person. It's really hard to stand this type of writing written in first person these days.

Life is like a play, and it's the kind of live broadcast! If you're not careful, you'll end up on the wrong set! For example, the guy who accidentally entered Wuhan some time ago, or the fat man living on a desert island! Or maybe I, an old man, am actually writing a novel? Whether active or passive! If you enter the wrong set, then change your role and keep fighting! In order to get a good ending!

One man and many women, on the verge of death; crazy temptation, 👍👍👍👍

I'm not used to the first person, please change it.

🤝😁 Support

The author, a fellow student, has only read three chapters. I would like to make a suggestion! Can we change the first person pronoun? To be honest, the writing style is okay, the subject matter is okay, but the first person is very uncomfortable... If it is changed, the score of this book will be at least several times higher... Really...

I have invested and worked hard. I believe that I will succeed this time. I will definitely be able to take off the title of "Street King". If I don't believe it, I will just invest in everything.

I also wrote "Desert Island Survival". After writing 50,000 words, I wrote the main character to death.

Nice. It's just that the update is too slow

I'm not used to the first person, bye

Newcomer, does anyone pay attention? Please read my book "Ding Fei on the Desert Island" and give me some advice.

Received! Take your time and read it, it's very well written!

Very well written, will continue to subscribe

Never be a eunuch

I have read a survival novel about a fat man before, but I have lost contact now. You, the fat man, have a worse life than that one, but it doesn't matter, you will soon realize your dreams and successfully lose weight!