Xinzang Line

As the only reader who may be persisting in reading this book, I would like to give you some advice to the author here. The current data of the author's book can be said to be very bleak, but I don't think the author's writing is bad. It can only be said that it does not conform to the model of the online literary world, but is more suitable for publishing books. First of all, there is the issue of subject matter. Most people will not pay attention to the classification of reality when reading online articles, because the classification of reality, in popular terms, is not exciting enough. Reading pictures in online novels is a pleasure. In the illusory world of books, you can seek dreams that are difficult to realize in reality. Therefore, the audience determines that reality classification is difficult to get ahead. The second is the author's writing style. The first-person writing style does not suit the readers' appetite. There is also the format. There are too many words in the first paragraph, so it is better to divide it into more paragraphs (the author's later paragraphs are better). Too many words in a paragraph will make it difficult for people to read. This is also the consensus of the Internet literature community. To be honest, the author's writing style is still very good, and he also has his own way of narrating the story, but it is too real, which does not conform to the survival rules of the Internet literary world. In the final analysis, an online article is just a beautiful dream. Readers do not need how real, cruel, or thought-provoking it is, as long as it is beautiful, it is enough. Of course, if your work is popular enough, it's also good to write some profound content in a clever way. I don't know what the author's purpose was in writing this novel. Was he trying to make money (I guess it's not this)? What do you want to express? What to record? Or do you just want to write something? But I want to tell the author that it is difficult to survive in the online literary world. If you want your work to have good results, you must make changes, especially you cannot choose realistic themes. As an old bookworm who has been reading online novels for nine years, I admire the author very much. It is really not easy for you to persevere until the book is released or even finished with such results. I also wanted to write something, and I did write something, but then I realized that I might not be able to persist, so this novel was not published. I hope the author, unlike me, can stick to the path he has chosen and keep going. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! ps: It is recommended that the author check out some posts in Writer Assistant, which contains a lot of useful information, or check out other successful works, which will definitely help your writing.

I read it and saw the title of the novel included. I was very happy. I thought I was the only one writing the story of Xinjiang. I finally saw the second story about Xinjiang. Even though I was just a passing visitor, I was very happy. Come on, work hard, your novel mentions Mazha Military Station. My novel "Under Wusun Mountain" was originally written about Mazha Village, but later it was specifically changed to Mazhazi Village. Do you know what Mazha means when translated into Chinese?😁😁😁

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