Where Is the Beauty? Flowers on Brocade

I saw your comments in the Writers Academy, so I followed you on a whim and read your novels 😁😁😁 I am also an author, and I saw how much your words touched me, so I couldn't help but want to give you some suggestions... I think you have overlooked a very important thing - the detailed characterization of the characters. This one is more diverse. It directly describes the face, clothing, and temperament, or reflects the character's mood through the surrounding environment, and enhances the atmosphere... You wrote it in the book, but it was basically just a quick brushstroke. As a result, I couldn't even create a specific character image after reading several chapters. (It may be related to the fact that I have read very few novels on this subject, but I think it is better to treat readers as if they are reading this type of book for the first time) Secondly, it feels like you are rushing to promote the plot, and no matter how rich the content is, it cannot withstand the consumption of fast food. If your rich dialogue is supplemented by corresponding description of the environment, it can establish the character image to a great extent and slow down the pace appropriately, in line with the main tone of your work. After all, your words gave me a beautiful experience at the beginning, but did not give me the time and space to stop and appreciate it. I see that unlike me, the updates are basically very stable. I only learned last week that recommendations are only available for stable updates, and I started stable updates after discussing with the editor. If you have been tested and pushed but still haven't gained any readers, it means that the problem I mentioned above does exist. The writing style is still worthy of recognition. I am also a new author. Let's work together 😁😁😁